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A sequel to Spicing Things Up (http://aryion.com/g4/view/284283) in which it is revealed that no one should ever ride the bus in my stories.

This was an insomnia story.

Also, despite the potentially ambiguous eventual outcome, we'll call this one definitively non-fatal (unless you feel like imagining it otherwise).

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Jones

Posted by Jones 9 years ago Report

I, personally, would love to ride a bus in the universe you've created!

Well done as always. Although I don't wish insomnia on anyone (had it myself for many years), it certainly seems to help your writing! Thank you again for a lovely little read :)

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

I've been doing pretty good with the sleep lately. Just two nights this week, and not many at all in the weeks prior (hence the dearth of stories for a while there).

ninth

Posted by ninth 9 years ago Report

Nice followup. Great work as always and better yet on these tags.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

Thanks!

DRayElliott

Posted by DRayElliott 9 years ago Report

Uh oh, my Grammar Nazi is suddenly on the loose. You used the wrong 'hole' when talking about his face entering his wife's backside.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

If that's the worst offense, I'm astonished.