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A commission and sequel to the previous story:
http://aryion.com/g4/view/283269
John and Janice continue in their new sexual lifestyle but John is starting to have some serious doubts.
Hope you all enjoy and please feel free to comment below!
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Posted by theheadsn 8 years ago Report
Awesome story :)
Posted by fredhailton42 8 years ago Report
Oh, this was great! O.O I can't wait to read the next part, if you're going to continue!
Posted by W4RR3N 8 years ago Report
For some reason the turn off for me was how she was being caring a bit but then you made her turn into a complete bitch.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 8 years ago Report
Yeah, I do hope they manage to mend their relationship. She does seem to have turned a pretty awful attitude, and isn't even noticing that... he WAS hurt.
This is one of those stories for me that I both love, and wince at, because the casual fun-loving use of spouses as sex toys like this is awesome. I can tell that it's turning her on, and she doesn't want it to stop or start to feel guilty about it, hence her closure to her husband's doubts. But at the same time, I hope the characters all get a happy ending. Hell, she didn't even swallow Babes down to keep him company. The fact that Allen left Babes out of that strikes me as a bit... weird, and possibly sinister. I kinda hope not, but I'll wait and see.
I hope that John is able to get through to his wife that what he wants is a restoration of their day-to-day intimacy, and compassion towards him. And that she'll be able to explain to him how much it means to her to use her beloved husband as a sex-aid.
Posted by Frazone 8 years ago Report
It also seemed to me like Allen was trying to kill John.
Posted by W4RR3N 8 years ago Report
Exactly!
Posted by W4RR3N 8 years ago Report
I'm starting to think this isn't the first couple Allen and Babes have done this to.
Posted by crushxtreame 8 years ago Report
thats a givven
Posted by thetrueenigma 8 years ago Report
Those were exactly my thoughts as well, great story and wonderful read, but im kind of hoping that the story doesnt continue down this path, even though it is deliciously antagonizing
Posted by thetrueenigma 8 years ago Report
I kind of felt the same way. Its very rare that i see cock vore to oral vore (and its personally my favorite kind) and i love the scenario and the whole situation of it, but afterwards the disregard for Johns life was something that deeply disturbed me. I love the story, and the fact that it also in a way hurts the soul while pleases the mind is something i enjoyed, but at the same time i hope they fix their problems ya know =p
Posted by crushxtreame 8 years ago Report
same here
Posted by theheadsn 8 years ago Report
Definitely needs a 3rd part :)
Posted by thetrueenigma 8 years ago Report
Thats what im thinking as well =p
Posted by shortprey20 7 years ago Report
I just love this story! Cock vore to oral vore through a blowjob is my darkest fantasy! Hope to see it more soon!
Posted by Ihatehater1994 7 years ago Report
I hate Janice now, why didnt ahe ask if she could eat Babes. Also when will this story get another chapter?
Posted by Ihatehater1994 6 years ago Report
Dude when you gonna update with another chapter?
Posted by shortprey20 6 years ago Report
This is a commissioned piece, so probably when someone else commissions him to write another chapter.