My commission by the incredibly talented  StickyGlobule


External: https://aryion.com/g4/view/307487

Textless Version: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/ianvw2hre31y6t2/AACfDE91bzI_dc_BCmcMAJNsa?dl=0

I thought I'd try to be productive during the commission process so I decided to write an accompanying story.

Note: This story was thought of and written AFTER the commission pitch, so if you'd like to ignore my attempt to provide a narrative for a basic vorish situation, you can simply enjoy the picture without context : )

Actual canon source material is involved, also : 0


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The bright sun nearly blinded Sakuya as she opened the grand doors of the Scarlet Devil Mansion. Covering her face, her eyes slowly focused and relaxed to the violent rays. It was another hot yet beautiful day of a seemingly endless summer, one that the maid hadn't seen in quite a bit of time as she was tending to her mistress, who demanded extra attention when the sun unapologetically kept her from leaving her own grounds without protection. Internally, she was somewhat thankful to get away from the crabby vampire for even a miniscule amount of time. The matter at hand wouldn't take long, after all, so Sakuya opted not to blink to her destination and strolled at a regular pace. Instead, the watch simply dangled from her hand as she walked, unused.

Meiling's sleeping habits were worse than ever, causing great frustration for the maid. What was strange though was that her needless excuses were replaced by wild ramblings about seeking and battling a great evil. The maid figured she was borrowing and reading too much manga from the great library, but it still concerned her. Time would benefit Meiling for once as Sakuya crept slowly to the gate, giving a hopefully awake gate guard enough time to sense her presence.

Instead, she found Meiling asleep. Sprawled out on her back sleeping, in fact.

The watch slipped from Sakuya's thin fingers, which then clenched into a fist. A few deep breaths followed. The head maid softly massaged her throbbing forehead to contain her flash of rage. She removed a single knife from the back of her apron and thought of how to proceed. She didn't like resorting to physical punishment, but now Meiling was simply ignoring every opportunity to improve her work ethic. Looking at Meiling's dozing face, Sakuya noticed that it looked pained and stressed.



The knife tensed in Sakuya's hand while she estimated the best place to aim. Meiling began picking herself up off the grass, much to the maid's surprise.
"Meiling..." Sakuya began but when the gatekeeper finally stood, her head drooped and her eyes remained closed. The pained expression remained on her face. Sakuya lowered her weapon and looked at the slouched girl closer.

"Is she still asleep?" The maid said aloud, not getting a rise out of the sleep walking redhead. The opportunity for an effective strike presented itself, but Sakuya instead decided to see if she'd do anything else.



The patient maid observed Meiling's mouth as it spread to a slight toothy frown. A low growl began to emit from her mouth and stomach. Sakuya was baffled by these spastic changes and became slightly alert. She looked down at her knife.

"I wonder... would this wake her up or help her sleep?"

Both of Meiling's hands shot out and grabbed Sakuya's forearms, causing her to lose her grip on her weapon. Sakuya looked back up to see Meiling's snarling face right next to hers.

"What... Meiling, wake up and stop that!" Sakuya's demands fell on deaf ears. The sleeping figure didn't loosen her grip in the slightest. Instead, she planted her nose close to Sakuya's neck and sniffed.



"An...chint....tech...neek.." Meiling barely understandably mumbled out. A maid outfit, maidcap, knives, and a light blue colored bra lay crumpled across the grassy area. Sakuya stood still without a scratch, wearing only her underwear, and unable to comprehend the delicate maneuver unleashed by the sleeping guard. The shock left her reactionless to Meiling hoisting her up by the armpits.



Sakuya's legs furiously kicked the humid air as Meiling sucked on her firm rump. In a matter of seconds, the head maid found herself plunged into the maw of the guard, who judging by the faint heartbeat she could hear from within, was still sound asleep. Arms pinned to her sides by the tight muscle, there was no possible way for her to grab anything for support. Not that there was anything to grip, she was stripped of all of her knives and her watch laid on the gate path. For the first time in a long time, the maid felt completely powerless; entirely due to her subordinate, no less. Her wet braids sweeping across her face only served to emphasize her indignity. With a wet squish, her head entered an organ aching to be filled up, bringing her butt past Meiling's mouth and into a quick descent.



Meiling's well rested eyes blinked as she awoke to the real world. The bizarre yet satisfying dream flashed in her mind, leaving her smiling as she prepared to yawn. Instead, a strident belch discharged from her mouth. Confused, Meiling slowly felt a sharp weight keeping her grounded. Her dress was undone and split down the middle, leaving her busty chest nearly spilling out of her stretched undershirt. This was all from the squirming figure trapped in her tight, bloated stomach.

"W-what the? When did I eat something this bi-" The sight of the pocket watch brought her thoughts to a dead end. She pushed her back up the wall with her legs, dragging her belly along the grass. Looking upon Sakuya's crumpled clothes and discarded knives, the realization dawned on her.

"M-miss Sakuya?!" The bulge shook suddenly and a muffled voice emitted from within. Unfortunately, the well fed guard couldn't understand one word.

"Oh nonono this is bad, how will I get her ouuuUUUUURRRRPPPPP." A second belch emitted, causing her belly to contract and constrict the maid in a tight, claustrophobic snug. Now, being rendered motionless, Sakuya could only use her words for any type of salvation, although the declining air supply would soon remove this last resource. Her bottom tingled as the pool of acid gradually built up, her last bit of clothing falling apart in the sizzling liquid. Still, she desperately tried to move any part of her body, only causing Meiling's bloated skin to stretch slightly.

"Oooh that....that feels good." Meiling cooed, the drastic situation escaping her thoughts. Her legs shook in pleasure and gingerly lost their support, letting her back fall down the wall. "*yaaaawn* You're so filling, Miss Sakuya. You're making....me.....really.....tired..." Meiling lazily whispered as her voice gradually gave way to slow, rhythmic breathing.

"W-wait! Meiling, don't fall asleep!" Sakuya cried out in despair. All she could hear after was the slow heartbeat she heard earlier on her way down. The guard slept soundly once again, and her superior could only wail in sheer hopelessness and wait for her life to fade away in the gastric pit.

The gate guard didn't defeat a great evil, only causing a sufficient loss that would surely instigate dramatic inefficiencies for the mansion she swore to protect.

Still, with her stomach full, at least she didn't need a lunch break.

theweirdone445: I'd love constructive criticism and explicit opinions on my works. I aim to improve and your feedback is very important to me.

Of course, any words of praise are appreciated too! :)

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