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This story was originally posted on FA, on March 11th, 2012.
I apologize for any formatting issues.
Quote:
"I got this idea from a comment posted on one of my latest journals. Here we have an African plain, with Zerky, my fursona, as the hungry hunter. Those of you who know me, know that Zerky isn't going to come out of this story on top. So sit back and enjoy.
It's probably not my best work, but hey, I haven't done this in quite some time."
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Posted by immortalsane 9 years ago Report
Hi,
Good story! I liked your characterization, and the writing was pretty tight! The only thing that threw me a bit was "hyon," but you used hybrid about fifteen words later and that got me where you were going.
If I might offer a suggestion? If you use the built in spacing that Word offers, g4 removes that space when it converts. I've found the only way to get g4 to recognize spacing is to add them in using hard returns.
Still, great stuff! If this isn't your best, I look forward to reading more !
Posted by BerserkerB 9 years ago Report
Thank you for the kind words. I apologize for the special wording, I used it a little too often for describing my character, without thinking that it made no sense to most people. I'm glad you caught on to it, though.
As for the formatting, a lot my work from a few years ago was done mainly for posting on FA, which basically just linked to the .doc file for download, this meant all my formatting was fine since they were just reading it straight from the file. This has caused me some problems as I start posting them to sites that have different formats, and it's mainly something I've just been content to deal with until I catch up to where I am.
Thank you for the suggestion.