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Updated version of the gif from last night (that old version will also be moved to the WIP folder). now there are more frames and even added stuff at the end! Most importantly, it's not moving at a super fast speed (I hope) I know it still might look a bit odd, but I am taking note of things that will need to be focused on in future animations. Input from all of you is greatly appreciated. Thanks to everyone who gave critiques on the gif before. it was very helpful.
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Posted by PegaSUS 9 years ago Report
The descent's a bit choppy now that we can view it slowed down, but this is still really good! (My computer can't seem to handle gif files well, so it might just be me, haha.) The extra frames certainly do help in forming the finality of the swallow, though! Chrysalis looks like she's enjoyed this quite a lot; noting her satisfied added burp/sigh (and the adorable lip licks).
Wonderful work, overall! Good luck with your future works!
Posted by Unbirthlover2014 9 years ago Report
Plz hurry with the rest of this comic plz
Posted by ParallelBlack 9 years ago Report
Fantastic ^^ Much better than the first version, but as PegaSUS said, you might want to add a few more frames in there to make up for the slower speed.
Posted by yes 9 years ago Report
Well done!
Posted by silverspec 9 years ago Report
Nothing like a butter-flavored pony to wrap things up. This is good, good job! Love her little burp in the end.
Posted by AthleticDashie 9 years ago Report
This will be added too right?
Posted by Niku 9 years ago Report
This animation counts as the continuation to the previous page.
Posted by AthleticDashie 9 years ago Report
Oh, you will do Part 3 Tomorrow? I think Applejack will get Apple stuffed into her mouth by Chrystalis
Posted by Niku 9 years ago Report
part 3 will be coming soon, but I actually have one more page planned out for the Fluttershy portion regarding what happens with Angel before moving onto AJ.
Posted by AthleticDashie 9 years ago Report
Applejack's Situation will be possibly worst because her family and CMC in my eyes are going to be involved
Posted by BigMamaNoms 9 years ago Report
How about instead of bugging the shit out of poeple for things fpr ypu to fap to, why don't you let the artist take their time?
But no you can't you just cannot wait can you?
You are a sad sad man....
Posted by Luna20 9 years ago Report
absolutely love it, looks so much better, pretty much the only thing I would of loved better would be FS's tail out a bit and for a little longer, maybe wagging a bit, Chrissy's head tilting a bit back. This is so adorable, I really hope you'll keep making adorable vore like this X3
Posted by Niku 9 years ago Report
ah yeah that would have made things even better! well there's always the next one. and thank you very much, I will do my best in making more adorable vore!
Posted by Luna20 9 years ago Report
yep, also love how nice and slow it is, like next time we clearly see AJ's tail out for a bit before she slurps her up c:
Posted by DarkPinkie 9 years ago Report
A little less smooth ow that its slowed down a litte. But that's to be expected. An extra couple of frames would really help.
Posted by UnforsakenFantasy 9 years ago Report
You should of added the.. legs going in as well, I almost was unaware this involved the comic.
Posted by CapturePoint 9 years ago Report
Deliciously bulgy. Great work!