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The normal cooking stories I make... I think I kinda just threw stuff to the wall this time and what stuck stayed lol.
This was only supposed to be a weekend project, but ended up as a 4 month workout.
Hopefully if it doesn't kill me I'll be making another one with a bit more of a detailed ending ;)
As always constructive criticism is appreciated!
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Posted by sandysoxx 9 years ago Report
Great story! Casual fatal is the best.
Posted by Uri 9 years ago Report
Thanks glad you liked it!
Posted by Genericcook 9 years ago Report
Very cool, like it a lot.
Posted by Uri 9 years ago Report
Thank you! I enjoy your work too!
Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report
Hmm do they get revived at any point or is it just the end?
Posted by Uri 9 years ago Report
Well, that is up to you really. With the way the story ends there is enough "Unknown" that you can make your own ending.
Mostly when I write I try to just "Guide" the reader to something. Putin thought and story to it, the rest is for them to make up or imagine themselves.
Though if you're asking my point of view? Its the end :P
Posted by grill93 9 years ago Report
It's a really good story! I like your vivid description of how Amelia is being prepared for dinner.
Posted by Uri 9 years ago Report
Thank you so much!
Posted by Cruich 9 years ago Report
Yay! A new story from Uri!
Posted by Uri 9 years ago Report
How many buttons I hit this time? >:D
Posted by Cruich 9 years ago Report
Quite a few! You did tease in a couple of places and shy away, but you didn't leave me unsatisfied. :)
Posted by ryanshowseason3 9 years ago Report
I like how it stays so upbeat and cheery.
Posted by Kelly 9 years ago Report
Wow I really enjoyed the story :3 Keep up the good work O: You are great in making storys
Posted by CadetLT 4 years ago Report
There's definitely a certain appeal to the idea of just suddenly ending up dinner, and the nonchalant way everyone treats it just adds to it. And the "having a friend over for dinner" meme never gets old for me, even if that one ninja5 guy on DA keeps going back to the well for it over and over again. Works well for Dolcett worlds where it's just normal, although you have to wonder if anyone else would end up being sore because *they* were going to roast her next weekend or something.
Posted by Uri 4 years ago Report
The casual nature has always been one of my favorites!
Posted by Kelly 5 months ago Report
I hate how awesome stories like these are hidden so well by just missing so many tags v.v
Posted by Uri 5 months ago Report
Its funny you say that considering you found this story 8 years ago lol
Posted by Kelly 4 months ago Report
Sorry I might have the big stupid. Or rather I have a more "refind" taste for vore mostly doing tag searches these days where I know I would enjoy the stories being told whilst back in those days I would just villy nilly look at random stories
Posted by Uri 4 months ago Report
I'm glad my silly little story fits your taste ^^
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Posted by Kelly 4 months ago Report
it did 8 years ago and does to this day. If you ever wanna make more of those :3 I love reading them <3