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Happy Halloween!
In the conclusion to the four-part tale, a young woman and her magically-empowered benefactor exact lewd retribution upon a bevy of sexy, costume-wearing sorority girls, including tentacle-ravishing, lesbian bondage sex, and of course, excessive amounts of vore.
Fair warning, this story contains a TON more explicit sexual content than usual for me, so do bear that in mind.
Anyway: Ladies and gentlemen, that's a wrap! Took me long enough to get through the whole thing, so hopefully it was worth the wait. It's about half-again bigger than the longest of the previous parts, so at least there's that. xD
I'd like to dedicate this collection of horribly gratuitous vorishness to the sadly gone DT forums, where years ago I publicly posted a story for the very first time, and was met with a shocking amount of encouragement. I probably wouldn't have ended up in this weird-ass fetish-writing hobby in the first place if not for that site. And of course, Ben, AKA psychoboy07 the former super moderator, who sent me the premise for this thing. And then I veered WAY out into crazy land with it, of course. xD
I hope everyone has a great Halloween!
Previous installments: Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
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Posted by Lacrymal 8 years ago Report
Simply epic.
Plus there's twins!!! This isn't just Halloween, it's an early Christmas too.
Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
Thanks! It was quite a lot of fun, despite how long it took to finish.
And yeah, sometimes you've just gotta have sexy twins. And this was one of those times. x3
Posted by psychoboy07 8 years ago Report
Apologies for just now commenting on this. Was able to read it at work but there's only so much you can stretch a "bathroom break". Plus auto-correct was being a bitch but I digress.
Rather fitting the climax of the story be the most sexually explicit, with your usual top caliber writing. Loved the more subtle touches as well, like the demonically themed Lilith taking Angela as a sex slave and the running "gag" of Rusa not appreciating people calling her a bitch.
This tale was an awesome tribute to Disturbed Things and I look forward to stuff from you in the future, friend.
Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
Thanks a bunch, my man. I'm glad it wasn't a huge letdown or anything, considering how long the wait was for this thing to get finished.
And not to spoil anything, but it's *possible* I'll be putting out as little vore-epilogue thingy in the not-too-distant future. Though timing depends largely on how busy I am with the encroaching holidays. ;P
Posted by V 8 years ago Report
Great finish ;)
Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
Thank you very much. :D
Posted by thisgirlroolzz 8 years ago Report
WOW!!!!!!!
I have been a huge fan of your writing all along, but that was by far the best ever!!!
The combination of all that wonderful vore (slugs and worms are my very favorite, and both in one creature? wow) and tentacle sex and all that pleasure!
I am literally tingling from head to toe, that was a masterpiece, it had everything that I think good vore needs and even more, (gets on her knees and bows to you in worship).
All hail Prinnydood!
Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
Wow, high praise indeed! Thanks so much! You totally made my morning. :D
And I did have a feeling you'd enjoy this one in particular, given all the tentacley action that took place therein. :D
Posted by lenscap 8 years ago Report
Wow, you sir are the undisputed master of vore prose!
Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
Thanks!
Ha! Well, I wouldn't go that far, but within my little DT-style niche, I suppose I have become somewhat prominent over the years. :D
Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report
I probably enjoyed this a lot more than I should have. :D Rusa and Lilith's sheer *enjoyment* at watching everyone get gobbled up made me grin.
I think I liked the parts with Angela best. Given that she was actually nice, and *helped* Lilith out of kindness, I was hoping she would be kept as a pet, rather that swallowed up and digested. Lilith's casual teasing as she hesitated about Angela's fate was fun, and a nice bit of suspense, too. If ever you decide to write about them again, I'd look forward to it; otherwise, I'll just enjoy imagining what Angela's new life as Lilith's pet is likely to be like. ;)
Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
Haha, well I'm glad I managed to keep your interest with this most gratuitous and depraved of Halloween-themed shenanigans. x3
And it's certainly possible I'll revisit these characters at some point, though it's certain to be quite a while from now, given how much time I've spent on this recently . . . definitely in the mood for something different at the moment. xD
Posted by LilyLove 8 years ago Report
It's a perfect end to the series! Every part was good, but I especially like how you kept things open for more adventures of this vore duo and their pet. Who would've thought revenge could be so delicious? :p
Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad it managed to live up to expectations, considering the several years from start to finish in this one. xD
And yeah, I generally like too keep things open-ended, on the off chance I might want to revisit the setting some time in the future.
Posted by ilikefunnystuff 8 years ago Report
This series was (is) incredible. I hope you dont end it here. It would be incredible if you took the three characters to a california beach and gobbled up all the cali girls, or an all american girl private school, or a nude beach in switzerland and gobble up all of those blond haired green/blue eyed girls. You could definitely top this series with an all out multiple prey story arc where hundreds of girls are gobbled up by various creatures & tentacle raped around the world. And you could definitely have Rusa and Lilith enslave more girls and maybe a set of red head twins? Please keep this series going, its too perfect. Only other thing it is missing is a little electro stimulation/torture, foot play/worship/tickling and full body tickling.
Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
Ha, I'm glad you enjoyed vorish and tentacley excesses here. x3
While I don't currently have a followup in the works, I did deliberately leave it open-ended enough that if inspiration does strike me, there's plenty of material to work with. And you can be certain it would plenty of sexy ladies being gobbled up en-mass.
Posted by anais2000 8 years ago Report
Wow. That's a more than satisfying and fulfilling end to an epic sage of passion, revenge, bondage, tentacle sex and vore!
I almost thought the poor twins would avoid the "treatment" after pleasing Rusa (she must have been really hard to please after all that teasing in the other chapters).
And speaking of teasing... Oh my, Angela's blobbing and ordeal inside the bed-monster was almost over too soon! I have a feeling that Angela is going to become familiar with that kind of treatment in the near future anyway...
I'm a little sad at this story's ending but I know you'll rise to even greater heights!
Now, where do I find one of those beds?
Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
Thanks! And, well, considering a started this one over two years ago, it seemed appropriate to push the envelope somewhat. And yeah, I imagine Angela's gonna have quite a spectacular change in lifestyle now . . . but at least she gets to skip the skip the digestion part, unlike the others.
Oh, and voracious monster blob-beds are available for free, in all the places where you least expect them. ;3
Posted by ilikefunnystuff 8 years ago Report
This series is near perfect. It only is missing some tickling and foot fetishism. Does anyone know where I could find more stories similar to this series? Ones with mass vore?
Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
Thanks! Sadly I don't have strong feelings about tickling and foot fetishism myself, so those have never made it into any of my stories (there may have been some incidental foot stuff, but nothing focused). Of course I certainly don't mind them either, and given that they're pretty common, I might throw a bit of those in some time in the future. You never know. ;P
Mass vore, in the other hand, is a premise near and dear to me. I don't know how thoroughly you've combed through my archives, but there should be several others with large-scale devourings in them.
As far as other authors using that theme . . . not much I'm aware of unfortunately, which is part of the reason I write so much of it myself. There were a few really inspiring stories I read back before Disturbed Things died that I still have saved: One about an alien crashing a women's soccer game, a couple about a deep-sea ooze-monster eating women at a beach & gym, and one about a giant mutant anteater devouring dozens and dozens of cute Japanese girls Kaiju-style.
I could PM any/all of those to you, if you'd like.
Posted by ilikefunnystuff 8 years ago Report
Omg please do pm them to me! And as far as your other stuff goes, ive read it all! Its all so fantastic. Trick and treat, and volleyball voregy are the best. I really love this series though. I just love the sadistic way the two women behave towards the sorority sisters. How one ends up a slave. The tentacles. Oh my its perfect. And goodness, if you write something similar to this series and throw in som tickling and foot fetishism that would truly be the greatest.
Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
Haha, thanks.
I have to admit a deep fondness myself for scenarios where sexy ladies feed other sexy ladies to weird monsters. I'm sure at some point there'll be a proper continuation of this, once I can come up with a sufficiently appealing premise from Lilith and Rusa to get up to vore-themed mischief in.
Posted by Vixen20 8 years ago Report
I hope Lilith gets her own comeuppance :P
Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
She certainly was pretty naughty here! x3
Posted by Vixen20 8 years ago Report
Really though, thinking over it, I wonder what kind of beasts Heaven's Angels could summon and use? I mean, there's a lot of beasts that are just... Well, beastly/monster like but have a 'pure' status! Like Eastern dragons and the like....
Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
It's true. Dragons of various sorts have been holy in mythology, and in some cultures snakes are considered sacred. Quetzalcoatl was basically a 'feathered serpent', and something like that would be pretty vore-applicable I think.
And if I took artistic liberties, there are probably a good number of predator-type creatures that could justifiably be considered 'holy' or 'sacred'. I'd want to make them clearly distinct from the warped invertebrates, plants and oozes that Lilith and Rusa used, yet still appropriately strange and voracious.
Certainly 'food' for thought! ;P
Posted by Vixen20 8 years ago Report
"The Rise and Fall of Lilith" :P <3
Posted by Xali 4 years ago Report
I just re-read through this one again. It's still great. One thing I especially like which is as far as I can tell, a unique detail to this story and maybe one other in this archive (Volleyball Vorgy) was the moment of a highly extended tentacle-mouth which is holding one girl in place while still going about the business of slurping down more women, so the first one gets to feel their wriggling bulges squeeze past her and then slide away out of sight.
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report
Yeah, this one was (and maybe still is?) my longest-running set of directly-contiguous stories. Still pretty happy with the final results.
And yeah . . . now that you mention it, that 'throat-bulge closeup' was something I really liked, but then totally forgot about after like 2 instances. xD Maybe I'll try and work it into something new sometime, though it does require a fairly specific sort of predator, anatomically speaking.