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Just a little something-something, set after the events of Sorority From Hell, involving a teddy-bear tentacle monster, tentacle-sex, and vore. I'd originally planned to include this in the final part, but time constraints got in the way. So here's the expanded version!
Also, if you're interested, you can vote on my next big vore story premise on my current journal. Poll will be up for 30 days as of this writing.
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Posted by anais2000 9 years ago Report
I'm so glad the teddy bear monster got to make another appearance and show what it does better!
I have this impression that Angela adapted quite readily to her new status in life. Good for her! :)
Posted by PrinnyDood 9 years ago Report
Thanks! It really is a rather unusual creature with lots of potential, so it seemed reasonable to have it get another 'showing'.
And yeah, Angela is a rather adaptable, and flexible young lady. :3
Posted by V 9 years ago Report
Looks like Angela is still surviving, so she is doing something right ;p
Posted by PrinnyDood 9 years ago Report
Yep! She's naturally well-suited to her current situation. They say everyone has a talent. xD
Posted by Vixen20 9 years ago Report
Awww... Sorta sad to see that Lilith did decide to target random, innocent people rather than anyone who'd really deserve that sorta fate ^^;;;
Angela is adorable though. xD Poor girl.... xD
Posted by PrinnyDood 9 years ago Report
Actually, funny you should mention that, but this is supposed this be part of Lilith working her way through her 'revenge list' (and getting some sexy 'home movies' in the process) with Angela's help, since the whole theme of the series was gratuitous, excessive payback. But apparently I forgot to include the clarifying dialog snippet. xD
Anyway, suffice to say, the three unlucky ladies here did indeed do something to invoke Lilith's ire, though obviously her retribution was somewhat out of proportion with what was done to her.
Posted by French_snack 9 years ago Report
Hehe… I admit, it's a pleasure to see these two again. Good too see Angela is, um, thriving in her new role! :D
Posted by PrinnyDood 9 years ago Report
Haha, thanks! She certainly does seem a perfect fit for the part. x3
Posted by PaulaDeen 9 years ago Report
Really good stuff; a good amount of detail and consistency.
One thing to be careful of, though: you always used "its" wrong. Its is for possession, belonging to, description, etc. "It's" is a contraction of "it is". If you're ever unsure of which one to use, simply substitute "it is" in, and if it doesn't work, use "its".
Posted by PrinnyDood 9 years ago Report
Thanks!
And . . . yeah, the it's/its thing is apparently the bane of my literary existence.
I appreciate the advice, but unfortunately the problem isn't that I don't know which goes where if I actually stop and think for a half-second, it's that when I'm in the 'zone' typing away, my fingers seem to put it in wrong with startling constancy. xD
Even when I'm editing, my eyes just seem to pass over this type of error. I'm not kidding when I say I often do a text-search for every instance of 'its' and 'it's', especially for long stories, to make damn sure I find and fix every single one. But in cases where I forget . . . you get this.
Anyway, sorry for the rant, and much thanks for pointing it out. I'll go ahead and fix it now. :)
Posted by thisgirlroolzz 9 years ago Report
Great story! Love the friendly master/slave thing, sounds fun.
Posted by PrinnyDood 9 years ago Report
Thanks!
And yeah, it seems they're getting long pretty well so far. :D