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if anything I've ever done proves that I am true trash, it's this fucking story, but I'm posting it anyway because why not
when I get a crush on a good guy, it really sucks-- because obviously I want them to eat my characters, and a good guy wouldn't do that, which is honestly the reason why I tend to go for villains in the first place. but occasionally someone comes along that is hotter than should be legally allowed, and I have to make my fantasies happen somehow without stomping all over their characterization. usually that compels me to treat them as a hesitant predator under specific circumstances, but sometimes I'm an asshole.
so here's Diarmuid (Lancer) from Fate/Zero really not wanting to eat sad suicidal Citrine (who is his master in the Grail War in this story, but is 5000% incompetent and can't do her job as usual) and having to do it anyway because of some bullshit compulsion magic that's part of the series canon. he did nothing wrong and he doesn't deserve this. I'm actually kind of sorry and I should probably draw some not-sad art of him later to compensate for making him suffer ;<
WARNINGS:
- M/F
- Soft vore
- Macro/Micro
- Human predator
- Unwilling predator
- Willing trash prey who hates herself and legitimately wants to die
- Mind control
- Implied digestion
- Implied fatality
- Attempted vomiting
- More stupid fandom bullshit as usual
- Unrequited love
- Lots of crying and regret
- It's fucking sad
- Seriously why did I do this
- Diarmuid is too good for this sinful earth
(oh yeah and here's the picture the thumbnail comes from, for anyone who wants it)
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Posted by HungrySuccubus 9 years ago Report
I CANT WAIT TO READ AND THEN UNDERSTAND THIS AFTER I WATCH THE SHOW
Posted by Cerulesta 9 years ago Report
hahahahahahaha :'D It's not that hard to understand even if you haven't seen the show I don't think, but it'll definitely have more meaning if you're familiar with it. I look forward to it! It's not quite as long as a lot of my other ones either so hopefully it's not super unmanageable (it's like 6 pages I think?? I don't even pay attention to this shit) \o/
Posted by ouphe 9 years ago Report
Based off that .gif, I'll assume it's his eyes that help cement the current obsession?
Posted by Cerulesta 9 years ago Report
JESUS FUCK YES. :I His eyes are the most beautiful things I've ever seen, I can't remotely handle it. ... not to mention that I think his fucking magical hotness (that's a real thing, his little beauty mark is legitimately cursed so that chicks fall in love with him) transcends the boundaries of fiction, and that might also have something to do with me falling for him. ;v;
Posted by ouphe 9 years ago Report
It's magical.
Posted by Cerulesta 9 years ago Report
IT'S LEGITIMATELY MAGICAL, YES. Actually, upon re-reading this story, I realize that I drooled over his eyes and gratuitously described their beauty at least 5 or 6 times (albeit with various different descriptions). ... They're very pretty, ok? :'>
Posted by ouphe 9 years ago Report
I'm going to sidestep the Lucky Charms reference and just agree that you discussed his eyes a lot. :P
Posted by HungrySuccubus 9 years ago Report
POINTS AT THE SCREEN AND FUCKING SHRIEKS FOREVER
THIS IS NOT OKAY NONE OF THIS IS OKAY I OUGHT TO RUB YOUR NOSE IN THIS FILTHY MESS YOU CREATED YOU MONGREL OH MY GOD I CAN'T DO THIS I CAN'T
FUCKING
D E A L
HOW DARE YOU WRITE THIS SO BEAUTIFULLY AND HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME WANT TO KEEP READING IM SO MAD I GOTTA GO PUNCH!!! SOMETHING!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Cerulesta 9 years ago Report
AAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA
aughfghjl i'm so glad you actually liked reading it though even though it was horrible and heart-wrenching!! thank you so much ;v; and it's ok you can punch me, i fucking deserve it after creating this awful awful thing
Posted by HungrySuccubus 9 years ago Report
i am gonna do sO MUCH WORSE THAN JUST PUNCH YOU OK YOU NEED 2 LEARN THAT THIS IS NOT OK TO DO
(i love this so much it hurts my heart!!!!!! pls never stop ever eve r everrrr!!!!!!!!!)
Posted by Cerulesta 9 years ago Report
I AM A LEGITIMATELY BAD PERSON >__>; it is because I love him that I hurt him... but I still feel like an asshole for it ;v;
(thank you!! honestly your reaction is pretty much what I'd hope for, screwed up as that may be? I want people to enjoy the story but also want to scream 'HOW COULD YOU'-- so this tells me I was very successful in that regard!)