Posted by oishi1 9 years ago Report

Excellent immersive buildup. I was excited when you said you were writing another forbidden dish story, and you didn't disappoint. You get in the character's head well, and that is what makes each story intriguing.

Posted by French_snack 9 years ago Report

Thanks. It's an interesting setting in which to look at characters' personalities and reactions. There are quite a few possibilities.

Posted by TheWiking2000 9 years ago Report

Another great Forbidden Dish tale! You don't take too many risks here, the story following a very similar arch to some of your previous Forbidden Dish stories, but it's so well written, and the pacing here is perfect, that it still feels new and refreshing.

Grace really is a predator in more sense than one! A very aggressive and efficient saleswomen, no doubt. Very bold of her to simply walk up to the table and eat off another customers plate like that. Hot and bold. It paid off tough. For both Svetlana and her;)

Posted by French_snack 9 years ago Report

Thanks! Grace is quite fun to write. She's bold, confident, assertive, in her own friendly engaging way, and despite her small stature. She's the… pleasantly domineering kind. Even when people realise she's playing them, they still go along with it! ;)

Posted by srimak 9 years ago Report

Excellent penmanship and attention to detail! Your greatness lies in exceptional ability to capture everyday situations that is easily recognizable. Obviously shrinking is not possible but you embed that into one believable setting and therefore the shrinking and eating thing seems like no big deal at all. I also enjoy reading your Felarya stories (especially Elli stories) but the “realistic” part is missing in those. Therefore Forbidden dish stories (and IVC), are my favorites, simply because your excellent skills in making extraordinary things ordinary shine through in those settings. I’m also thankful to writers such as Girlfood and Oishi1 that created and expanded this wonderful universe.

I’m especially delighted in how you portrayed Lindsay in this story. She has appeared in numerous Forbidden dish stories, but has previously never hinted the inevitable outcome of digestion. “They’re no trouble at all. They go through you nice and easy, like any other food. You can just eat up, and let your guts do the rest.” :) Excellent and would be happy to see more of that, and even more explicit stuff, in future chapters! Speaking of recognition; I’m pretty sure that everyone knows an egocentric and narcissistic girl that resembles Lindsay in real life. They usually post loads of selfies every day on Instagram and simply love their mirror image. I know a couple of such girls that I’m pretty sure would be regular at Forbidden dish, if such a place existed in real life, wolfing down small men whilst feeling powerful.

Posted by French_snack 9 years ago Report

If the Forbidden Dish were real, I'm quite sure it would attract that type of customer, yes. I do like the idea of girls eating people *casually*, as if it's no big deal. And then giving them no further thought. Thanks!

As for the "outcome of digestion"… When writing in someone else's setting, I try to stay more or less within the established limits. (Which is why I never write about Milly emptying her bowels, in Felarya. She obviously does do it, so you just have to use your imagination. ;)) So, much as I would like to see Lindsay sit her sexy bare bottom down on a toilet seat, I'm not sure we'll be seeing that any time soon...

Posted by srimak 9 years ago Report

That’s very respectful and thoughtful of you! :)You are indeed a “guest” in Girlfoods Forbidden dish universe, and you really make an effort to stay inside the boundaries defined by the creator. I fully agree with you there. Luckily I have a vivid imagination which, I guess, is a trait that I share with all my fellow vore fetish brothers/sisters. ;)

Posted by astrall 9 years ago Report

Hey French_snack! Can we expect another Forbidden dish story or maybe other shrunken human story with human pred soon? I really love these stories :) Thanks.

Posted by French_snack 9 years ago Report

There'll probably be one at some point, yes. My level of motivation to write has been lower than usual these past couple of days, but I'm just waiting for it to return. :)

Posted by astrall 9 years ago Report

I understand. Knowing that there will be another one is worth waiting for :)

Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report

Just been reading through these gems again and noticed a little detail that had me wondering... when Lindsay says “I had two yesterday, and that was kind of a slow night here”, is she by any chance referring to Alec and Lucy from story 105? If so, it's a nice little allusion I missed before!

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

Good catch! I can't remember whether that's what I had in mind, but it's certainly possible!