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A middle school boy runs away from home and gets a surprise when he decides to hide out in an alley.
I think this piece is the best one I've made yet. I've been trying to work on my descriptions lately, but let me know if you think there may have been too many. I tend to over-describe my vore scenes on purpose and there is a delicate balance between describing a lot and still leaving stuff for the reader's imagination. There were also some requests for a fatal story in the comments of my other works, so hopefully those people will appreciate this one :) .
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Posted by anyonarex 9 years ago Report
Lovely story, feral preds are always great fun. :D
Posted by Sharktooth987 9 years ago Report
Before i read is this male or female prey
Posted by Thorne 9 years ago Report
Male
Posted by Sharktooth987 9 years ago Report
sharkys out
i hate male prey
Posted by aimy 9 years ago Report
Then you are free to decide not to read it of course. But next time keep that comment for yourself please.
Posted by Sharktooth987 9 years ago Report
lol
the storys probly great bc the male prey i red the start of it and it seem like it was going to be good
Posted by aimy 9 years ago Report
Another great story again, thanks man!
Posted by Thorne 9 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Lewdtonium 2 years ago Report
amazing