Hey guys! Here is an experimental piece that I threw together quickly, and since it is experimental I didn't go through the entire editing process. I want to see how it goes before I decide to spend more time on it.

One of the things I love about vore is when the prey becomes a part of the preds body, either as muscle or (preferably) fat. Knowing that days later the prey is still wobbling on the predators body is the best thing about vore, but very few people write about that aspect.

The first part of "Following In His Footsteps" was an experiment on that writing, and I bring you another experiment in the same vein. The story follows Dane months after the events of "Bet Among Friends", so you may want to read that before reading this.

Let me know what you guys think, if enough people like it I can start to incorporate these themes into my writing.

Enjoy!

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