Posted by Drakira 9 years ago Report

It was wonderful, but is there going to be a second part ^.^?

Posted by Randomness 9 years ago Report

I'm dying for a finisher. ;)

Posted by Belloc 9 years ago Report

I don't know. Leigh is a character I know I want to revisit. Maybe we'll see more of Cass. Maybe what's left of her. ;P

Posted by Randomness 9 years ago Report

Oh gosh, you're about a worse a tease as Leigh is~!

I, however, would love to see how Cass' new disposition is... ;)

Posted by lyingunderfire 9 years ago Report

I really enjoy this work! Mainly because I can relate heavily to both of them: the naiveness of Leigh and the anxiety-riddled Cass. Yes, I am both and it is a dangerous cocktail of emotions which you accurately portrayed. One of my favorite pieces of writing on this site so far.

Posted by Belloc 9 years ago Report

Wow! Thank you very much for that comment. I'm glad I could capture those emotions and mindsets so well.

Posted by lyingunderfire 9 years ago Report

Plus, and I cannot believe I did not mention this before, I enjoy the thought of a fatal yet innocent predator that is not accidental nor reforms. This is the only time I have seen such a combination in a character.

After reading this and the other two stories containing Leigh, I hope you continue with this character periodically.

Posted by Belloc 9 years ago Report

Yes, I love the idea of an innocent but intentional pred. Accidental vore can be ok, but I don't like writing it since it usually has no emotional weight (some people do it very very well). Reforms, not a fan of. I'm also not a huge fan of ignorant pred who just don't realize what they are doing. Leigh knows what he's doing. For me, Leigh is a lot more interesting because he's so morally strange, but he IS still moral. He eats without psychopathy, without hate or cruelty. He does it gladly and cheerfully and fully aware.

I plan to keep using Leigh. He's going to be the feature of a large project I'm planning soon called Party Wipe. I put a post about it on my blog if you're interested. He's a lot of fun for me to get in his head. ^^

Posted by lyingunderfire 9 years ago Report

My comment was originally much longer but I decided on cutting out most of it but you summed it up with this phrase:

"Leigh knows what he's doing. For me, Leigh is a lot more interesting because he's so morally strange, but he IS still moral. He eats without psychopathy, without hate or cruelty. He does it gladly and cheerfully and fully aware."

And that is why I love this character.

By the way, I already saw and commented on the blog in mention. I cannot wait.

Posted by HelperofThor 9 years ago Report

Darn it I love this character >.> and the whole concept. Though you would think he would run out of willing collab partners...but I guess some people are just so desperate for views

Posted by Belloc 9 years ago Report

Admittedly, it makes no sense that Leigh should still have willing collab partners. I honestly don't have a good justification for that one. I do hint that he probably has some streams that are just streams, where no one ends up gulped or anything, or streams where he has to abide by rules and doesn't get to eat anyone if he doesn't win enough times. Still, pretty big gamble for views. XD

Posted by lyingunderfire 9 years ago Report

I chalked it up to ignorance and how he might be not that popular. More of a cult following streamer.

Posted by Belloc 9 years ago Report

A good possibility. Leigh's notoriety is different from story to story. The only thing consistent is that he has a dedicated following that has included more noxious elements in the past but is now smaller but more self-policed.

Posted by HelperofThor 9 years ago Report

you did seem to point out she sorta just had to ask him not to and she more than likely would have been safe. Or...well, safER. And he does seem just abit oblivious, like the whole not understanding exactly why they are so fussy about being eaten, even though he knows they end up as sewer filler and stay that way.

Posted by lyingunderfire 9 years ago Report

Taken from my comment string:

"I'm also not a huge fan of ignorant pred who just don't realize what they are doing. Leigh knows what he's doing." - Belloc

I think that rules out not understanding. I think the whole "safer" bit is more due to distance between the two. If she had told him before he arrived this might not have happened. In his presence however, you saw the outcome.

Posted by HelperofThor 9 years ago Report

Well i meant not that he didn't understand everything or some such, just that he didn't seem to comprehend the entire reason for their fussiness over the whole BEING eaten part, not the whole process. To him its the normal.

Posted by lyingunderfire 9 years ago Report

Oh! I get you.

Posted by Ruler101 7 years ago Report

You're stories are so good, but I always feel kinda terrible about what happens in them. Sometimes I think I'm too squeamish for my own fetish.

Forgive me for commenting on something so old. :p

Posted by Belloc 7 years ago Report

Thanks a lot! There's definitely some bittersweetness to some of my stories.

Posted by Ruler101 7 years ago Report

Heh, just a little. Leigh's normally the kind of pred I really like, but I guess I just started identifying too much with the unfortunate victim. ;D

Either way, still a great read!

Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report

Please tell me that there will be a second part OwO

Posted by Belloc 7 years ago Report

I don't really have a second planned. But I'm sure there will be more Leigh in the future since he's one of my main OCs.

Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report

YESH i cant freaking wait ~

Posted by Bright 7 years ago Report

Who knew that streaming was such a dangerous occupation.

Posted by Belloc 7 years ago Report

It's a hard life!