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[CM] Jill and Samantha in ''Taken'' - Page 8 By Debolte -- Report

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Sketch comic commission for Paogordo of their characters Jill and Samantha.

Finished that one yesterday before hopping on that last thing I posted. Forgot to post it, here it is~

Had some free time this week and as I saw I was somewhat productive I thought I could as well get a bit of work done on this unfinished series... Still not unhappy to have done some personnal work this week, had lots of fun, putting some new ideas on paper...

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LittleSlimy

Posted by LittleSlimy 9 years ago Report

PLOT TWIST !

testuser

Posted by testuser 9 years ago Report

Egads!? What is happening?

gr8feeder

Posted by gr8feeder 9 years ago Report

Im bit confused about the first pic. Did I miss something??

Debolte

Posted by Debolte 9 years ago Report

You've seen page 7 ? Ehh if that's the case then as I feared, I didn't make that 1st panel (and strip) clear enough... Basically we see a belly shuffle towards them in the last panel of last page and here we see her from the side. The script read something like "Jill moved towards them with her belly dragging on the ground, then stopped, licking her lips and patting her belly." The stop movement is far from clear in the 1st panel but I thought the next text bubble would suffice. Oh well :T

gr8feeder

Posted by gr8feeder 9 years ago Report

Oh,now I got it! The problem was I thougt the big balloon approaching them in the last pic was Samantha's gut spreading out of her cell:). And yeah,the note about stopping in the second panel didn't make it any more clear,lol. Thanks for explanation:)

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 9 years ago Report

:O

Max_C

Posted by Max_C 9 years ago Report

Oh my! Very nice. Love those facial expressions. Why is this piece more pixelated than your other pieces?

Debolte

Posted by Debolte 9 years ago Report

Thanks ! :D Oh well this is a sketch commission but since I have a very hard time not going into detail, I felt I could deviate that obsessive attention to detail with a pixel tool... to no avail haha I still put a lot of time on keeping the lines clean. So yeah, I'll keep this way for the rest of that comic but I think I'll just ditch sketch comissions on my next commission opening... or sketch comics at the very least.

Also I guess I put more effort on the lineart because I still wanted the trade-off to pixel lines to be fair...

kidclef

Posted by kidclef 9 years ago Report

Shyamalan, eat your heart out.

algog8

Posted by algog8 9 years ago Report

Are we going to see sam get bigger?

RDY622

Posted by RDY622 8 years ago Report

When are you gonna drop the next page ?