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Tags: Belching Big Belly biolabs Burping Demi-human pred experiment Female Prey Howard Alt-Eisen Human Prey humanoid pred Implied Digestion Licking M/F Male Pred mastersmith Oral Vore Original Character playful pred Priestess ragnarok ragnarok online Rekenber Corporation Same Size Size difference stretching Swallowing Swallowing whole teasing
A priestess named Serika Merisan gets separated from her party while investigating the mysterious Rekenber Corporation and their connection to a series of adventurers that had been disappearing periodically. After futile attempts to escape the third lower level of the facilities, she decides to snoop around for a bit more dirt on the prestigious company and their terrible secrets.
But she would never be prepared for what she was to find.
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This is based from a game called Ragnarok Online! I have always loved the lore, particularly surrounding Lighthalzen's Rekenber Corp and the dungeon hidden in their headquarters that is considered to be the hardest in the entire game: the Somatology Labs. (There's some info here, for those interested: http://irowiki.org/wiki/Lighthalzen ) The monsters there have always been my favorites and I tweaked things a bit for the sake of the story and its vorish needs. :) I hope you enjoy!
Also, here's visual aid for Howard: http://i.imgur.com/Wa4jXTk.jpg and http://i.imgur.com/bOhNOo0.jpg
And for my OC, Serika Merisan (this is really old art of mine): http://i.imgur.com/qhBDhgN.png
This is long and I put a lot into it, so I hope you enjoy the story! Feedback is absolutely loved. Hope it was worth the wait for a story from me!
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Posted by SuperSlosh 9 years ago Report
Unf, that little bit of extra description on digestion goes a long way, I like it.
Posted by Chameleonette 9 years ago Report
Thanks. :) Glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by naga07 9 years ago Report
think i added another male pred to my list
Posted by Chameleonette 9 years ago Report
Sweet! Glad I'm not the only one who can see him as pred material. :)
Posted by Marauder 9 years ago Report
Hey a new story, nice to see you writing something! :D
Posted by Chameleonette 9 years ago Report
Haha, thanks. It's been awhile, but the bug hit me since I went back to RO after a 2 year+ break from it. And I'm not one to squander inspiration when it comes.
Posted by littletreaty6 9 years ago Report
Good to see you posting again, really missed your stories
Posted by Chameleonette 9 years ago Report
Thanks! :)
Posted by kagamichan 9 years ago Report
Love your writing as always
Posted by Chameleonette 9 years ago Report
Thank you kindly! :)
Posted by Hariken 8 years ago Report
Finally got my lazy ass around to reading this; I never have time to read things anymore...
SO. Howard is a canon character from the game? He looks pretty damn good. And Serika is pretty cute, too. Seeing the pictures of Lighthalzen and Googling some myself, I didn't expect the outside to look so... formal. Wow. The interiors, though? God damn, you paint a picture with words.
Fantastically done. The climax - the vore - seemed a bit short, but, 'tis vore. I myself have a hard time writing it anymore. The buildup was very well wrote, and it leaves a series of wonder and thirst for more knowledge on what else goes on in those dungeons!
Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report
I appreciate you taking the time to read it, regardless!
Yep, Howard is a canon character---so are the other Biolab monsters/spirits. And thanks! I'm glad the descriptions came across well. That's always important for me to do when I know the setting but the reader likely does not.
Thank you very much! And yeah, the vore scene wasn't super long, but I'm glad you enjoyed the build up! I had fun playing with the concept. And your feedback is very appreciated! :)
Posted by TootCore 6 months ago Report
This is one of those that sometimes rears it's head back up from the depths of my memory to fully take all space in my head until I give it a re-read. Something about the inevitability while she is still being talked to in there tickles -that- part of my brain.
Posted by Chameleonette 8 days ago Report
Aw, I'm flattered that you enjoyed it enough to return for a re-read! Thank you!