Posted by atreides213 8 years ago Report

This is a really sweet story. Absolutely loved it!

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I'm still a bit ehhhh on sharing it, but happy to hear that someone enjoyed it, at least. lol

Posted by SuperSlosh 8 years ago Report

Woooow this is good.

The only other vore-related writing I've enjoyed as much was one of Bitter's works, and if you've read their content you know what kind of compliment it is.

Also, were you embarrassed to share the story because it's how you would feel in that situation?

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

Ahh, thanks a lot! I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed it.

And while I do relate to the protagonist in some ways and some of the embarrassment could stem from that, it's mostly because of the fact that this isn't the type of vore that I even like, much less write. It's so far out of my wheelhouse that I didn't know what to think of it.

Posted by SuperSlosh 8 years ago Report

What, the semi-willing part or the samesize?

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

Semi-willing / cute-ish vore. I enjoy both same size and size difference, so that's nothing new to me.

Posted by SuperSlosh 8 years ago Report

I think it came out really well! You encapsulated the emotions somebody might (theoretically) feel excellently.

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

Well, I'm happy to hear that. Thanks!

Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report

This is great. XD From the moment Evinek tried and failed to stealthily get in through the window, I was smiling. You did a great job of capturing these two awkward folks coming together to share a really sweet, really awkward moment. Cool idea, great execution. :)

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

Haha, thanks! It was a challenge writing a pred completely different from how I normally do. But I figured, eh, if i was in the mood to write it, why not give awkward vore between two really awkward people a go? I'm glad you approve~

Posted by Marked 8 years ago Report

Poor Evinek is so adorkable, yet I would be just the same in his shoes. Really nice story, thank you for posting it.

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

I'm glad to hear he comes off as intended. Haha. Thank you kindly! Took me 3/4 of a year to post, but at least I finally did, I guess.

Posted by BusinessAsUsual 8 years ago Report

The thing I like most about this has to be Evinek's personality. He actually seems to care about her before he eats her.

It's nice to see a predator who thinks about his prey first.

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

I'm happy that you enjoyed him! Thank you. And yeah, even in much darker scenarios, which are more my kind of thing, I like the pred and prey to have a connection and for the prey to mean more to him than just food. Casual vore/vore between strangers is fine, too, but I like it more when they're well-acquainted or become acquainted.

Posted by BusinessAsUsual 8 years ago Report

I couldn't have worded it better.

Posted by Brainfood 8 years ago Report

Oh, man. I think I'm gonna have to try out writing shy preds because of this. So good.

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

Haha, by all means! And thank you kindly. :)

Posted by Hariken 8 years ago Report

2017 - The Year Of Chammy Lewds. So it begins. A mix of some personal sadness thrown into my feelings on the story due to the lonliness gives an odd feel about this story. It hits so many more emotions than that, however: your writings are treasures.

I had to read this before goinf to bed, had no chance till then, so I cannae say much while on a phone, but expect more of a comment later! Fantastic job, too, as usual! ~

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

Hahaha, well, I wouldn't say THAT. Plus, I technically wrote this in 2016, anyway. But thank you kindly!

I appreciate it nonetheless, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Posted by Hariken 8 years ago Report

2017 - The Year That Chammy Starts Posting More Lewds. Welcome, welcome.

As I did say, more comments! Yes, Miranda touches on some of my own personal feelings towards things, but then it also does have some very amazing positions on vore in general: feeling wanted, as one, though I don't do prey roles myself, or try not to as much as I can. Brilliant emotional writing. Kind of an interesting idea with the game show secretly hiding monster boys in the entire world, too.

And I also have to say that this is far more lewd than some of your stories usually are; RO being dubcon, an older vore story you posted also having some dubcon, too, another story having mentions of erections and others having lots of nudity, but THIS one? Wow. You said in another comment that it's also some things relating to you ( not just the lewds though ) so it's interesting to learn a little bit more about you - despite us pretty much always having a chance to ask. ...me saying that sounds awkward, ugh.

BUT RAMBLING ASIDE, this is fantastic. Will we be seeing Evinek in the future, stories or drawn? I do hope so ~

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

Haha, well, that remains to be seen.

I'm glad you could relate to Miranda's feelings/plight a bit. It certainly says something that you could follow the emotion with her even when not playing as prey types, yourself.

Yeah, this one definitely had a lot of sensual/sexual bits in it, though I felt I still kept it on the light side (especially in comparison to things like Stained Glass). I generally don't delve into these things much in vore, but this story in particular flowed in the direction it wanted to and I went along for the ride. But I do relate to Miranda in some ways, so you can sort of see it as learning something about me. lol

Thanks again and I appreciate all the feedback! I don't know if Evinek will be a returning character or not. As I said, I was in a really weird state when I wrote this. I can't say whether or not I would write something of this nature again, or draw it.

Posted by Hariken 8 years ago Report

Pros and cons being able to relate to them types of feelings though, unfortunatley D:

I would say this is more... Hmm... It's raw compared to Stained Glass, if that makes sense. Both have emotion, oh yes, but this one is quite a different side of it, more personal sensual pleasure - from Miranda's view of doing it to her self rather than Farona just taking what she gets. ...looking at your Stained Glass stories, too, I don't... remember reading part 4. Shit...

Welcome! I see some of your stuff are merely oneshots but then with all the new material you give us at the same time, I don't know what I'd want more: completely new things, or continuations of things. Always Stained Glass regardless, though. I NEED TO READ THAT NOW.

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

Yeah, I know exactly what you mean. lol

That's the difference, yeah. Stained Glass is more raw passion/raw instinct, and this was more on the sensual side of things. I've written both types of smut and many others over the years, but this is the first time really in a vore context that I took that particular approach.

Haha, thanks again! And well, who knows---maybe there will be new things, maybe there will eventually be continuations of things. Only time and inspiration will tell. After all, Stained Glass's characters and concept laid dormant for many years before I enthusiastically picked them back up again in 2016.

LOL! That's the part I was telling you is from Yune's POV, since you wanted to know more about him. You'll learn plenty from that. :)

Posted by Hariken 8 years ago Report

'Tis a job well done on that new approach indeed, then.

I shall read ASAP ~

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

Thanks a lot! It is very different from what I normally do, but glad you enjoyed it, nonetheless.

Posted by Draconatedz 8 years ago Report

Very intimate, I love it.

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

Thank you very much!

Posted by ddrg12 8 years ago Report

oh my god... this story was really good i havent read all of it.. (i kinda skipped to the vore part but in time will read it all) i love your detailing, not to much and not to little. it was a bit on the slow side, but it was welcomed to all the stuff i have seen in the past few months, everything going to fast and to little detail. this is a rare beauty. i loved how he asked her if she could move inside him a little.. and the detail on how she had little air but she did it anyways, pleasing him.. and how she took it when he talked, shaking her small new world inside him.. the only thing that could make this better was it being two girls instead of a guy and girl. but hey thats just me. i will be bookmarking this for a later time to read it more..

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

I'm glad that you enjoyed what you read of it, thank you. Slow build-up is pretty much my kind of thing when writing (although occasionally I do shorter things with vore).

But I find it highly unnecessary for you to point out "it would be better if it was f/f" or the like. There is plenty of f/f material out there for those of you that like it. There is not much for M/F enthusiasts. And it's quite grating when someone feels the need to comment on my work and add something along the lines of "I wish this was a female pred", "I like it but I hate M/F", "this would be better/more appealing if it was x" or anything along those lines.

Again, I appreciate that you liked the parts of the story you read, but it's pretty rude to add something like that at the end.

Posted by ddrg12 8 years ago Report

i didnt mean to say i hate M/F, i like it. it was just my opinion, i am sorry if i offended you.

Posted by Ixtili 8 years ago Report

I think I know what the OP might have meant actually...we do kind of need someone who writes like you who can do F/F I think. (Not saying it has to actually BE you, but the dynamics you create are sadly seldom seen in the same sex corner of vore)

I'm not sure if you've noticed since it's not your thing, but it's rare to have female predators as enamoured with their prey as you write your male preds even the exceptionally cruel ones call out their prey's name in ecstasy. (Yes I read way too much of your stuff 0///0)

Compare that to female/female vore: It's usually all "Your going straight to my tits" or revenge vore. Sadly, I think vore of a relationshhip sort or even just sincere attraction or engrossment is reserved for M/M or F/M or M/F but never F/F.

So I think what they're meaning to say is less "This story needs more F/F" and more "F/F needs more stories like this".

But you know I could be wrong...hope I didn't offend you too 0_0;

Posted by ddrg12 8 years ago Report

yes! thats what i meant. :D

Posted by Eater99 8 years ago Report

This was really wonderful. Pred and prey were both adorable. I'm not always a fan of the reluctant pred, but sometimes a story starring one just turns out so excellently that I can't help but love it
Very well done!

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

Thank you very much! I'm not a fan of reluctant preds, either, but eh, we all get in weird moods sometimes. Haha.

I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, thanks a lot! :)

Posted by Ixtili 8 years ago Report

Awww...that's adorable. And congrats on being able to write a type of vore your not even into.

I think that's pretty neat, to be able to do something different and do it well just cause your in a mood to try it.

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

Thanks a lot. It was definitely out of the norm of my vore writing, but interesting to try, anyway.

Haha, well, I'm glad you think it was done well, even for a first try.

Posted by PrimalDesire 8 years ago Report

A most welcome return, Chammy! You always write the very best Vore-fics and this is no exception! I absolutely loved it!

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

Thank you very much! I've been back for awhile. I just don't write as much, since my art muse tends to be more active. But I'm glad that you liked this and I'm flattered that you consider my fics that highly, thank you!

Posted by TastesUndivided 10 months ago Report

Whether you consider cutsie vore to be your thing or not, you sure as hell succeeded in writing a damn good one.

Posted by Chameleonette 10 months ago Report

Thank you!