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Cassandra and her friends have found the perfect beach. Private, secluded, quiet. For Cassandra, it's a place she can come to sink into the cold water and forget her fears or worries.
She never realizes, though, that someone watches her from the dark deeps of the water. Someone who wants to put her somewhere much darker, much deeper, where she will never be touched by worry, fear, or even light again. Only by him.
This story features the wonderful, blind octoboy Yuval, who is owned by the awesome ShadyPixels.
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Posted by lyingunderfire 8 years ago Report
You have a thing for writing possessive characters.
Maybe I should have not used the word "thing." You have a knack for writing possessive characters.
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Haha, thank you. ^^ ShadyPixel deserves some credit for that too. She knows how to come up with wonderful and very clingy boys. :)
Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report
I must have missed this when you originally posted it, but I'm glad I didn't miss it entirely! This was really great. And I love the fact that the pred was more attracted to Cassandra's demeanor/energy/personality more than some typical buxom beauty that most tend to be. It was also nice to see that she had a lot of fight to her, too.
The descriptions of how Yuval "saw" her using his senses other than sight was particularly stand-out to me and very intriguing the whole way through. Nice work!
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Thanks! When Shady told me about Yuval, I knew I had to write a story about him. I love the idea of a blind predator who "sees" through touch. It just seems to make sense that the person who would "look" most beautiful to him would be someone full of energy and passion.