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Finally, Alice vs Gale. Thank you to everyone who read this series and I hope you enjoyed it.
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Posted by Chaos 8 years ago Report
Beautiful ending, loved it
Posted by Aickavon12 8 years ago Report
iunno, the story moved too fast for me to really comprehend anything that's going on. I feel as if I needed to watch One punch man to even get what's going on. Like... between the last part, and the part before that, I don't know who died or was injured or anything... like... what?
I understand you had a lot of things you wanted to do in a limited time factor, but you forced the story, making it FEEL rushed. And it was just a generally dissatisfying sensation all around.
Posted by Deviantfan16 7 years ago Report
Please continue this. It took me two days to read it all but by gosh it's amazing
Posted by crime0edge 7 years ago Report
Maybe, see how things go
Posted by Deviantfan16 7 years ago Report
I'll read um. Plus maybe I could help if you want. Of course I could easily stay out of your business if you want but I am willing to help ya if you want it
Posted by crime0edge 7 years ago Report
Much appreciated. Will keep that in mind if I ever do a season 3
Posted by Deviantfan16 7 years ago Report
I don't see why you shouldn't