It's here! The re-write I've been working is finally ready to be posted, and what a re-write it is! There's gonna be a lot of stuff that's going to happen before we get to Karen, and there will be more of an actual, progressive story this time around instead of things I made up on the spot.
Most important are the changes I've made to the vore system and how it works. It's been reworked to be a little more interesting and a lot more fun. At least, it will be once I experiment with it some more.

Let me know what you think.

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