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[WARNING:
COCK VORE]You wipe the sweat flowing above your brow to take
a look at the scoreboard. It had switched to an equal 40-40, bringing
it all down to the wire. The outcome of this last serve would decide
your fate, for better or worse. At the other side of the tennis court
was your opponent, who was unable to hide her growing anxiety under
her usual smug expression. She was an absurd hourglass of flesh, with
swollen tits the size of exercise balls hanging off her chest and a
gargantuan ass
The Court is in Your Balls
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It happened again. I started something thinking I knew where it was going, but a few chapters into actually writing it, I realized it wasn't going anywhere. Thankfully, I'm only four chapters into Perfect Goddess, so restarting it shouldn't be that big of a deal.
This time, however, I want to explain WHY I'm doing a second draft.
1. THE VORE MECHANICS WERE BORING - This is probably the biggest reason. I was looking back at all the vore scenes and came to the grim realization that they were all samey and not very interesting. The girls only grew bigger after reaching a certain quota of absorptions, which is pretty damn boring. The idea was that it would become more interesting as the girls unlocked more powers to abuse, but this led to a second problem.
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Posted by lupinus911 4 years ago Report
Hey I really loved reading your goddess series (old one and your redone one, I loved both!) Any idea if you'll get to continue or finish it?