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Winter Nest By BizzareBlue -- Report

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Poor little rat. Still, that's what happens if you are naive, tasty and show up in one of my stories.

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mojo-2131285

Posted by mojo-2131285 8 years ago Report

Very nice. Long, but the payoff was worth it.

BizzareBlue

Posted by BizzareBlue 8 years ago Report

Thank you. I did get a little carried away with the buildup on this one but I wanted to show a bit of Mina’s everyday life before showing how it ends. I was worried that the story took too long to get to the vore parts so I’m very glad that you felt it was worth the wait.

TootCore

Posted by TootCore 8 years ago Report

Smart squirrel, not smart enough. She should let the rats proliferate more so as to have a never ending supply. By playing her cards well, she could have none of them ever know.

Also, damn you Biz for teasing us with Mina's offer. >^>
The two went rather well together.
Well, now they really are well together, but that's how it is, isn't it ?

BizzareBlue

Posted by BizzareBlue 8 years ago Report

Yeah, but they're tasty and right there. It can be hard to resist snacking under those circumstances. Besides, she can always go get more once her current supply runs out.

As for the offer, well, sometimes squirrels are hungrier than they are horny.

TootCore

Posted by TootCore 8 years ago Report

Damnit Biz. Teasing us like dis. >.>

Redpod

Posted by Redpod 8 years ago Report

nice, nut, and tyhe digestion? xd

BizzareBlue

Posted by BizzareBlue 8 years ago Report

Thnaks glad you enjyod it.

Redpod

Posted by Redpod 8 years ago Report

You welromc,e but, and the digestiopN?

Redpod

Posted by Redpod 8 years ago Report

nice, nut, and tyhe digestion? xd

BizzareBlue

Posted by BizzareBlue 8 years ago Report

Thnaks glad you enjyod it.

DrakeZephyr

Posted by DrakeZephyr 3 years ago Report

It's a curious logic some of your predatory critters take. The, I like you a lot, I have eleven other trusting rats I could have picked, and a leader who trusts me but... meh. And as another mentioned, the whole... could have an eternal supply of rats versus a breif supply. Heck, if she does feel as she claims, some amount of sympathy, letting the community thrive would allow the justification of, having actually helped them... while skimming off the top. But then it is mostly a frame for the scene of betrayal and, duality of liking someone but also wanting to end them dispassionately which you seem fond of exploring.