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A commission for madsci.
Alan's life is going great. He's living with his girlfriend, his best friend, and his dog, and he couldn't be happier. Sadly, when his best friend, Chris, moves out, a new roommate moves in. Enter Kevin: gross, rude, and inconsiderate, Kevin is nothing like Chris. His presence is disgusting and unnerving. Soon, though, Kevin takes more than just Chris' room. Alan's dog, his girlfriend, even Chris. None of them are safe from the bully's hunger. Not even Alan.
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Posted by pendingdelet032h2439 8 years ago Report
great story! i love stuff like this thats why I wrote Three's a Crowd! nice!
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Thanks a lot! :D Glad you liked it.
Posted by Mad51 8 years ago Report
As always worth every penny! Nothing more appealing than a gross jock!
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Thanks! And thanks again for commissioning. :)
Posted by ZaaZaa 8 years ago Report
Oh. Oh my.
*blushing intensifies*
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Just the reaction I hoped for! :)
Posted by ZaaZaa 8 years ago Report
Not gonna lie, I was hoping for some post-vore disposal
Posted by lyingunderfire 8 years ago Report
Normally I am not one for grossness, but these commissions from madsci by you are great!
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. ^^
Posted by timdavis 8 years ago Report
This is exceptionally well written. I only wish the dog didn't have to die.
Alright, I also wish Alan had been eaten--I'd love to read the digestion from his point of view.
You're really very talented.
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Thank you so much! That's very kind of you. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Posted by Fez 8 years ago Report
Loved this story
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Thanks a lot!
Posted by boomer91 8 years ago Report
ugh cruel.
i love it ^_^
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
It is indeed! Thanks. :) Glad you liked it.
Posted by Bright 8 years ago Report
A terrifying story.
Well done!
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Thanks a lot! Glad you like it.
Posted by Ursa 8 years ago Report
This is a really well written story. Very visual. I'm tempted to commission you or do a trade if you are up to trade with me.
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Wow, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I would certainly be open to doing a commission or an art trade could be fun too. PM me sometime and let me know what you've got in mind. ^^