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Nina Zielinski has a plan for conquering the ironman* race on the Isle of Skye, and her daughters play an instrumental role.
Holy crap, I am a geography nerd. Hopefully my careful time poring over Google Maps to create a realistic course doesn't detract from the reading. Also, apologies in advance for any misspellings in names. I had never heard of these places before a week ago, and American spellcheck is completely befuddled by Hiberno-Norse-Scottish place names.
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Posted by KrasnyiKoiot 8 years ago Report
Always dig where you take these Zielinski Sisters stories, decidedly no exception found here! Cheers for sharing!
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Thanks! Happy to keep writing them.
Posted by LillyBells 8 years ago Report
i liked the story except for when the third sister was eaten, the race was already over why didn't she just eat normal food.....didn't make much sense too me
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Kayfabe explanation: Nina had just put herself through so much physical exertion, on such an unprecedented scale, that the normal nutritional options just weren't good enough. She needed something more, and Amelia was her only optin.
Shoot explanation: It's a weak reason, I know, but I thought it would make even less sense to have her eat one of them before swimming. Obviously, all three sisters are always going to get eaten, so it just had to have a reason. Besides, it let me use some of that slightly-annoyed, slightly-reluctant attitude that I love so much.
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 8 years ago Report
It's always a good thing to see a story featuring the sisters. Keep up the good work, Twrch.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
I always like to hear when people like a particular recurring (set of) character(s). Helps inspire me to do more.
Posted by Schpadoinkle 8 years ago Report
One of your best yet, imo.
Loved it.
Posted by BardicLasher 8 years ago Report
Sounds like she needs to hurry up and make more daughters.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Ha, that'd probably take too long. The question is -- who did she use to train like this?
Posted by Larkspurdiblock 8 years ago Report
Great work as always, man!
Posted by Kelly 8 years ago Report
wow really amazing story ones again ^_^
Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
I really enjoyed the setting and the reason to eat them x3
Posted by TwrchTwryth 7 years ago Report
Thanks!