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Edibility Check By TwrchTwryth -- Report

A very inebriated sorority girl catches a naga fleeing the scene of a mass voring. Can the naga talk her way out of it?


Silly little idea, silly, quicky story.

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Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 8 years ago Report

Nice... Wonder what would have happened if Stacy wanted to taste Katta

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report

Actually had this idea with cleavage vore. I do like the idea of a naga getting slurped headfirst between a large pair of tits, but I went with my first instinct on this one.

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 8 years ago Report

Okay that would be really nice to read out... Hope you could eventually use that

Zwanzik

Posted by Zwanzik 8 years ago Report

My only real critique is perhaps the last paragraph wasnt necessary? Enjoyed it otherwise!

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report

Eh, just in case the reader was dense and trusted Katta at her word. Might be a little heavy handed, but glad you enjoyed it.

Junogray

Posted by Junogray 8 years ago Report

Silly little story, Loved the whole thing, surprised mystical creatures don't hunt drunk prey more often

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report

I know, right? It'd just make things a lot easier.

TootCore

Posted by TootCore 8 years ago Report

Silly Stacy ! Even drunk she should have noticed the Naga was very unprofessional, and didn't bring a notepad for the edibility test !

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report

Ha! I totally should have had Stacy stop her mid-swallowing to ask about what kind of paperwork was necessary.

TootCore

Posted by TootCore 8 years ago Report

Anyways, great story as always. Seeing you have uploaded something is like getting this week's sweet chocolate treat at the pastry shop. c:

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report

Thanks!