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Just a quick little story I wrote for bluescreen . I wrote it on a phone so if there are any words that make no sense at all, let my know. I've cleaned up one case where crossing was changed to fishing, so I might have missed more. Male goes to the pool and accidentally sucks the water into his dick.
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Posted by bluescreen 8 years ago Report
I liked it :p
Posted by ShadesofBlack 8 years ago Report
A fun read! I particularly enjoyed the way that in this version of the setting, people just casually use their intimate orifices as extra-dimensional or compressed storage!
Posted by Houyo 8 years ago Report
When Leona is getting the water out there's a typo where it says
" Leona suddenly sucks your entire ball sack into your mouth, "
Posted by HungryAL 8 years ago Report
Thanks for the pickup, should be better now
Posted by Houyo 8 years ago Report
No problerino.
Posted by AngelicRune 3 years ago Report
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Posted by HungryAL 3 years ago Report
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Posted by AngelicRune 2 years ago Report
Still hot... Heck~
Posted by charlinia777 1 year ago Report
This was one of the first stories I read back when I first discovered vore. It still holds up.
Posted by HungryAL 11 months ago Report
I'm glad 7 years on it still holds up haha