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Another day, another choice!
With canine senses after a fresh digestion, the X-clone of Samus enters a room that smells like Flight and Cunning... but catching a bird with nothing but one's hands and the Brains of a crotch fungus is not the easiest task... albeit not impossible!
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Posted by Thunderluigi 8 years ago Report
I've said it before and I'll say it again, go for mental power here. Learning how to hunt is effective and all, hell I will say experience beats all else for how to Learning normally, but I think the parrot since be fused into our SA-X clone's gray matter, give her a boost in higher thinking so that she can react and process things down the line when in more dangerous situations. I know I'm just repeating myself but brains over brawn and all that. As for the extra stuff, try mixing the colours up and making a version of one of Samuel power suit colour sets, if there's enough there. I know our X may not know what that is but could happen by cell memory or something. If not then her own version of it, just keep the design there
Posted by Komodo 8 years ago Report
Me like! The reason I removed the powersuit was to indicate how mixes
of DNA may fight for Control of her looks. She only had very little
of Samus to go on for copying her, with the suit being granted by the
research team for decency's sake. Canine genes deemed it unnecessary.
(Also, sorry if it feels like a repeated choice for some out there. Many picked this door FOR the
expansion of the mind, but I still want to offer the Physical vs Mental offer at each prey for the
same of deeper effect on our little X. Physical absorbtion affects the looks and Powers more,
where as mental boosts the brain-power and logic, but keeps physical changes to a minimum =D )
Posted by Thunderluigi 8 years ago Report
No no I understand wanting to keep the choices there for consideration, that and it makes sense that some physical changes should be added. My mindset with this is to increase her mental and processing power first and formost, as to make understanding later additions is made easier as a result, plus the X in. metroid fusion act on instinct, so adding brain power and intellect such a species just seems like a good idea. I will support physical changes as they would be useful/the better choice or when it's later on in the story, but for right now, pushing our little X's IQ up just seems the best choice in my opinion. As for the power suit, just because the actual thing isn't there anymore doesn't mean the idea couldn't be worked in.
Posted by Komodo 8 years ago Report
Of course! I just wanted to specify for anyone curious or confused on the matter =D
And yeah! I have plenty fun working with our little X due to the fact that she barely has any
brainpower to utilize, making most choices more instinct-based than anything else...
Also, whilst first prey had mass to spare to store away, the bird does not. Notice that when
she stored the mass on her legs and arms that the physical changes focused there as well? In the case of the bird
there's just the colour to shift around, so I'm treating them the same way even if the results are but similar.
Posted by Thunderluigi 8 years ago Report
I can understand that completely, plus it is quite funny watching the X figure out stuff, like a newborn baby working out how to exist. Though of course it(since its not really a gender) should eventually gain some intellect as to make them more dangerous and able to survive. I've given my reason for this so I wouldn't repeat myself again. As for the mass I did notice and with the colour, I would like to see what you come up with for this, I think this story has alot going for it and the base idea behind it is very interesting as well, especially if Samus were to find out about the lab somehow and our little SA-X had to fight her as a finale of sorts. Anyway that's getting way ahead, just keep writing as you see fit and I'll voice any ideas I have as I read each part. Keep up the great work :)
Posted by Kartomic 8 years ago Report
Aww, poor bird...
Double down on boosting intelligence (and maybe learning how to talk). Convert the bio-matter into a plume of feathers on the top of the head, kinda like hair.