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This year, the Zielinski sisters represent their sorority in the annual Voreception competition. Who will win and who will get digested?
This originally was not a Zielinski sister story in my head, but once I decided to make it best two out of three instead of just one-on-one, it made sense to me.
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Posted by Plgc 8 years ago Report
Wow
Posted by Apostolos 8 years ago Report
Kinda a bit sad for the three from PY, forced into a live or death struggle without consent
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
It was a little bit of an assumed risk, since the sorority doesn't exactly keep it secret that someone will be selected. They knew there was a possibility when they joined. That being said, it was one of those little details I like to throw in sometimes to keep things from being too straightforward.
Posted by futavorelover 8 years ago Report
a zielinski story where they're not eaten by someone/something else what a twist
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
It took me until the last minute to decide whether or not to let them make it out. I decided it would be easier to write the last part using them than the P-Ys, so that's what I stuck with. What a twist, indeed.
Posted by Kelly 8 years ago Report
amazing
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 8 years ago Report
A new Zielinski sister story? Oh, Christmas came early. I am surprised that things went well for them for once.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Twist ending! I don't think it'll happen again.
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 8 years ago Report
I had a feeling this would be a rare thing, but I'm not complaining at all. By the way Twrch, you might want to look at this again because I noticed a couple things. The paragraph that starts with "Welcome sisters," has a weird space near the end that just cuts the final sentence in half. And then later on there's this bit later on where I believe you meant to use "They" instead of "The."