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Posted by ClarAya 8 years ago Report
I'm hoping this isn't the end of Rika
Posted by MonsterGirlLover194 8 years ago Report
Me too
Posted by Chuba 8 years ago Report
pls nu ;^;
Posted by DRayElliott 8 years ago Report
Or her her sister. After all, it takes quite a long time for Melinda to digest someone, so she has time to find a replacement meal.
Posted by Sharktooth 8 years ago Report
Act She can't pull someone out of her second stomach
Theirs a chance rika will grab her sister but maybe
Maybe not
Posted by darklord42 8 years ago Report
in Naga Story. Rika´s introduction to vore 15 she did say she can throw you up
Posted by Sharktooth 8 years ago Report
Ummm from the first stomach not the second
Posted by darklord42 8 years ago Report
reread Naga Story. Rika´s introduction to vore 15
Posted by Sharktooth 8 years ago Report
Your so dumb... she said if she try's she will throw her up before she enters she said once you go into a nagas second strong you won't be able to exit... ever
Read it before you argue
Posted by darklord42 8 years ago Report
No she can use her tongue to force you out of the firsdt dtomach and she can throw you up from the second stomach
Posted by Sharktooth 8 years ago Report
No she never said that go back and read it she said you can't never come out of the second stomach but if she try's to go in she will throw her up before she enters
Posted by darklord42 8 years ago Report
You it is not worth agrueing
Posted by Sharktooth 8 years ago Report
Actually it's you who's not. I'm not even sure your old enough to be here if you can't understand it. The English is something a 4th grader could understand.
Posted by darklord42 8 years ago Report
I am not that strong of a speller I am better with math and science
Posted by Sharktooth 8 years ago Report
That's why you shouldn't argue... I'm not good with English
Punctuation and that but I'm an excellent reader.
Posted by darklord42 8 years ago Report
Fair enough Mom is the speller
Posted by PlastikPikmin 7 years ago Report
That... Was such a stupid argumentation.
Posted by yoshman 8 years ago Report
I do. I really do. But it prolly won't be.
Posted by DanzoLegend 8 years ago Report
Bevermind...digest them both. Like man they both gotta go. We need parents that wont just let themselfs be eaten for reasons like this.
Posted by RaionWarrior 8 years ago Report
yes
Posted by ErRynArya 8 years ago Report
And i need to eat you for being yourself x3
Posted by UnforsakenFantasy 8 years ago Report
I completely agree with you dude, I like have no sympathy from these dumb nymphos, like I Like the lamia, because she does have a middle ground of compassion and whatnot, but these bimbos give no shits about their loved ones~
Posted by sivrel 8 years ago Report
Well, Rika sureis onher way to winning mother of the year... NOT! XD
Posted by Sergit 8 years ago Report
Sis is right! Vore is love! See? Both words share 3 letters! Coincidence? I don't think so. :3
Posted by almindore58 8 years ago Report
Technically all 4, due to the Japanese L and R switches
Posted by Sergit 8 years ago Report
Oh! Didn't think of that! Even more true then!
Posted by darklord42 8 years ago Report
No but she can throwup both of them
Posted by Sharktooth 8 years ago Report
No she can't
She can't get people out of her second stomach
Have you read the story at all?
Posted by darklord42 8 years ago Report
Yes in on of the pages she did say that she can throw someone up from her second stomach
Posted by Sharktooth 8 years ago Report
Link me :/
She said she can pull someone out of her first stomach but once in her second your not coming out
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
Look back
Posted by Sharktooth 7 years ago Report
I did... and it said she cant get someone out of her second stomach ill even quote it.
Posted by Sharktooth 7 years ago Report
https://aryion.com/g4/view/259410#item-itself
this and the page before it
She says
I have two stomachs. One for beautys like you. And the other for digesting. While being digesting the prey has non stop orgasms. I can pull someone out of my first stomach with my tougue. But not the second. (This is just a breif summery. (I quote this next part this is EXACTLY what she says)
'"So if you enter it on your own... you wont be able to exit it... ever" thinks to her self "and if you ever did, i would throw you up since i can do that"
She means by this. She would throw her up before she would
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
Her thoughts
Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report
Sorry
Posted by MasterGryph 8 years ago Report
This doesn't seem like a natural time to bring that up. Rika can start the next page by denying that her sister and Melinda could be lovers. After all, Rika has been with Melinda for months, and never noticed anything.
Additionally, I'm expecting a certain dog girl to get tail-slapped.
Posted by MonsterGirlLover194 8 years ago Report
Lets hope that Melinda regurgitates them both then swallows Midori.
Posted by VelveteenDreams 8 years ago Report
There's two types of vorarephile...
Posted by MonsterGirlLover194 8 years ago Report
Also Rika did say that she would never enter Melindas second stomach, but Rika is not thinking straight.
Posted by Vulgun 8 years ago Report
Gah, I really don't know if I should keep looking into Naga Story anymore. On one hand, I want to know how the story goes, wondering what'll happen, but on the other hand, this is honestly too tense for me to even handle, and I'm usually used to characters probably about to die. I really am split on this, because I just don't know if I should press on reading or not.
On one hand, curiosity might get to me, but on the other, the intensity might end up backstabbing me. But of course, there is one main problem this story has, and it's Rika, and I ought to say this in a critique kind of way instead of a simple comment.
From the first few pages, we saw that Rika was a likeable and relatable person, someone who might have had personality. But where has that gone now? All I've been seeing these last few pages are just an unreliable, unlikeable person who is not only a terrible mother, but she's an absolute terrible vorarephile too. When the story took the plunge into "more vore, less character", it ended up making Rika look like she lost brain cells and is just mindlessly wanting pleasure. I would've thought we could've seen an actual story of her trying to be a mother to her child, while also taking some time to be a vore fanatic. But to start seeing her like this, it's just honestly not a good thing for the character or the story. It's like ever since she has been taken in by Melinda, her personality has shifted in the worst way possible. What could've been a character with at least some character, at least even for a vore comic, is just now nothing significant and easily forgettable.
She's just devolved to your generic prey that anyone could probably whip up in a second if they wanted to. I haven't seen the Patreon at all , so I don't know what's further. Maybe I'm wrong and she's matured or something. Maybe I'm right and she is not really the character that could've been. That's my only gripe about this comic, and it's the character. And it's likely because of her that my tenseness and reluctance for reading the comic further is there.
After seeing her for so many pages and turning worse and worse, I just don't know anymore.
Posted by MasterGryph 8 years ago Report
Thank you, that's a good way to put it.
Posted by Camlio420 8 years ago Report
Yeah honestly i started reading this story for Rika not for the vore. I get that its supposed to be a vore comic but, a long running comic is kept running by its characters and since Rika seems to have devolved further and further into a generic prey bimbo i've been seeing more and more reason to quit reading.
Posted by Vulgun 8 years ago Report
Same. I really believe that if the character of Rika keeps degenerating as a character, the comic won't be any good. I mean, might as well just off Rika and focus on Melinda raising Sora right or something, I don't know.
It's just not interesting or captures my attention. And Rika's part of the problem.
Posted by Natsumemetalsonic 8 years ago Report
I see, I cant draw a comic that everyone can enjoy, If I choose a way for a character always there will be people that would prefer other option. But I only can say you something, you are Judging Rika in the middle of the scene, Rika is the protagonist, and as you can see in a page where the story is more advanced, Rika is still there, so, maybe something happens with Rika.
Rika, from the panel 1 of the 1º page was a nymphomaniac, thanks to that she get pregnat, she lost her house and her family, thanks to that she choose a life with melinda because she had a new house and pleasure inside Melinda, after the birth she was masturbating in front of the baby, she ran to Midori´s place to have sex, and thanks to the pleause, the "prey aura", the aphrodisiacs of the digestive juices of Midori and her nymphomania she is in the actual state of , as calio420 said "generic prey bimbo", Rika is falling in her nynpho problem like a junkie can fell down into drugs more and more, she want be digested by Melinda even against his will, and now she see her sister inside of the 2º stomach of Melinda and She is talking about be or no be digested only for pleasure.
I´m trying to show here the two faces of vore, the vore only for pleasure, like usually we can see in little comics, and vore with love, where a prey want be one with her prey, in this moment I´m drawing the part you can see that point, and Rika will be able see it too, probably.
You are free to feel... disappointed, even agry with the character, I´m ok with that, but the character is in full evolution in the middle of the scene, I think that you should wait to the end of the 1º chapter to judge Rika, and if she as character is the tipical prey or she will be a more interesting character. If after that you see her in the same way, ok, sorry about that.
This is the 1º chapter, "rika´s introduction to vore", that mean that Rika as Character have a introduction but she will have more experiencies with vore, maybe as a prey bimbo, maybe as a person that live with a predator, maybe as a predator, maybe she reborn from the darkness of her nymphomania or voremania to something more interesting.
I´m not agry with you or something, sorry if you read this in that way, remember that my english is very basic and is hard to me exprex my thoughts and feels in this language, but I wanted writte a explanasion with the same effort than you wrotte your comment.
Regards.
Posted by Vulgun 8 years ago Report
Fine, I'll wait and see what happens. Just how many more pages are in this chapter 1?
Posted by Natsumemetalsonic 8 years ago Report
I dont know yet, around 5 or 10
Posted by Vulgun 8 years ago Report
Well, she's lucky to be moving at all, considering that she was essentially cramped into an extremely small space for that time.
Posted by Gabriel0813 8 years ago Report
heheh no teasing the naga she cwnt help it if someone loves to be eaten by her
Posted by Liz 8 years ago Report
I can see Rika swallowing the other lady in the tail with that pose <3
Posted by smog1 8 years ago Report
i hope the beautiful snake woman gets a loving boyfriend in the end
Posted by RiderKick78 8 years ago Report
Why do I get the feeling all these sappy emotions will make her barf. In addition she may think of making that dog her next meal.
Posted by DRayElliott 8 years ago Report
Why not? It would reduce the competition if she ate Midori. I think that's the dog girl's name.
Posted by JohnnyF102 8 years ago Report
i like this, this is getting good he he
Posted by Sora 8 years ago Report
Love where this is going. Great work !
Posted by Ezio45 8 years ago Report
the dark side of vore still sadin me but I love vore. bad sexy snake girl tricking her with noneseinec
Posted by MasterGryph 8 years ago Report
The views being stated are what the Naga supposedly believes herself. However, her actions indicate otherwise: Melinda, as the landlord of an apartment building, has turned it into her personal food stock, manipulating it's inhabitants with her magical aura into being her prey whenever she wants.
Those are not the actions of a being who believes in love.
Posted by Natsumemetalsonic 8 years ago Report
Yes and no, Melinda only can use her aura over people that have inside the "light of vore", Melina´s aura can fuel that light to a big fire, the preys can be fall in love, or no with her, if they fall in love, Melinda will have a relasionship with the prey, Melinda is... special with love, you will be able see it in the future, if the preys dont fall in love with Melinda, usually they will become food for Midori, or they will go out of the building. Midori and Melinda no eat people if they dont want be eaten, and Melinda not eat random people, that is a problem for her, and you will be able see it too in the future.
Posted by RubytheWitch20 8 years ago Report
I am curious though as well, what happens to the souls of the girls that are eaten?
Or is that a silly thought considering the content?
Posted by Ezio45 8 years ago Report
I like that thay don't eat people that don't want to be eatin but kinda kills it with how fast thay try to trick or temt them. kinda the same but with a twist that their morale are clear kinda evil. like we know most it not all them from the start did not want to be but as time went bye in the relasionship thay will control the outcome to being eatin. I don't like seeing them this way.
Posted by Ezio45 8 years ago Report
I be game to feed my self to my lover as long as I can come out unharmed. to show love for the pleasure.
Posted by ShadowHawk 8 years ago Report
ripinkill
Posted by AronIsAGrem 8 years ago Report
Vore...s'about love. <3 OwO grem likes that concept.
Posted by JohnnyF102 8 years ago Report
oh boi vore love
Posted by JohnnyF102 8 years ago Report
How many pages are there gonna be?
Posted by moonlightshy 8 years ago Report
confused*
Posted by Deleteduser5cj39 8 years ago Report
This is a convenient explanation for vore to a potential non-vore love interest. Notes have been taken :3. Also great pic. Would do feed myself to my lover if they ever asked ;.;
Posted by Ixtili 8 years ago Report
I like how Rika's sister makes Melinda blush XD
I ship it. XD
Posted by Scarletscarletina 8 years ago Report
I hope she doesn't get digested or at least she'll come back because I like her as a character/protaginist
Posted by kaurendor 8 years ago Report
Wait, where is Rika's child?
Posted by xLuckyxShadowx 8 years ago Report
they'll be fine she'll throw both of them up and swallow some one nameless hopefully something like she was only a temp meal
Posted by Buck7098 8 years ago Report
when will you post the next page?
Posted by RaionWarrior 8 years ago Report
No new page today?
Posted by RaionWarrior 8 years ago Report
When is the next page?
Posted by DatPretzel 6 years ago Report
Hey I just met you, and this is craaazy, but I really love you. So vore me maybe.