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A timid, bored man finds excitement and fun with a fat, mean woman who's his polar opposite. Falling for this huge beauty, he discovers just how much of a big bitch she can be and how little it matters to him. A story that promises that you'll wish you had a big bitch in your life too.
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Posted by FULLGUT 7 years ago Report
Bro we posted on the same day, awesome gonna read the story soon lol
Posted by Chaos 7 years ago Report
The universe works in mysterious and weird ways.
Posted by mouth111 7 years ago Report
Bitchy preds have always been hit or miss with me, and Gretchen was definitely a hit. The way she absorbs energy by trolling others is my favorite part of this story. It makes me wonder if shes either practiced at putting people down in order to drain them, or if shes always been an undiciplined bitch.
The vore scene easily my favorite part. It all happened so suddenly, with Alex freaking out and Jenny overcome with fear and despair, it was perfect.
The dialogue is top of the line as usual. Gretchens first scene really defines her well.
Thanks for sharing!
Posted by Chaos 7 years ago Report
I thought the idea of a bitchy pred absorbing energy by trolling was a clever idea we haven't seen before and would make for an interesting character. I'd also have to say it's the latter, Gretchen is naturally talented at bringing out the worst in people and getting them upset. She was a bitch first, magic later.
That was an intense scene. For Alex it made him see himself as a son of a botch and Jenny was put through more abuse than anyone can handle. Gretchen though was having a great time. Two people's nightmare is her entertainment for the night.
I put a lot of effort in fleshing out Gretchen as more than just a big bitch and I agree that first scene sums her up perfectly. She'll go right for the kill, mocking or teasing someone with her first words. She's open about sex to the point that she's a total slut, but she has standards. I think if Alex had disappointed her during his first booty call the story would have ended right there with him in her belly.
It's my please.
Posted by babyhater 7 years ago Report
nice
Posted by Chaos 7 years ago Report
Thanks ;)
Posted by VelveteenDreams 7 years ago Report
Which picture did you use, love? I can't find it T.T
Posted by Chaos 7 years ago Report
RB23 will put it up eventually.
Posted by FULLGUT 7 years ago Report
BRO just finished reading, she is awesome! such a boss ass bitch lol
Posted by Chaos 7 years ago Report
Gretchen sees other boss bitches and calls them loser, posers trying to be like her. Gretchen is a blast as a character because she's so mean about everything and it never lets up, but she's also a lot of fun as she does whatever she wants and shaking that fat ass around. Thanks for the comment; I'm happy you enjoyed her.
Posted by RB23 7 years ago Report
good read 10/10, always love your stuff, man.
Posted by Chaos 7 years ago Report
Thank you so much, that means a lot to me. Thank you also for the drawing, it was dead-on.
Posted by Temp1234 6 years ago Report
Thumbnail looks amazing, but I can't find it?
Posted by Bellyl0ver 4 years ago Report
Neither can I.
Posted by Vorachist22 2 years ago Report
Gretchen is such an amazing pred!