Ten little mice brought to a femme viperine
One tried to take her seat, and then there were nine.
Nine little mice left aghast at their fate
One spoke without thinking, and then there were eight
Eight little mice with and an unanswered question
One’s voice proved a torment, and then there were seven
Seven little mice now running low on tricks
One’s aesthetics proved a mess, and then there were six
Six little mice left trying vainly to survive
One’s appeasement was cut short, and then there were five
Five little mice still struggling for the door
One’s judgement proved faulty, and then there were four
Four little mice stall for time to get free
One gave himself away, and then there were three
Three little mice now with little left to do
One tried to fight his captor, and then there were two
Two little mice still with nowhere left to run
One’s true identity crushed him, and then there was one.
One little mouse with a truth he could not shun
He gave up all hope, and then there were none.
...
Okay, as you have likely just learned, I'm not really a poet, but this reminded me of the "And Then There Were None" book by Agatha Christe where ten guests go somewhere they were invited to and all of them die by the end. It even has a comparable end as the last "guest" gives up after being crushed by the revelation ^_^
(BTW, couldn't help but laugh at Emi's contrite look when asking him to come over - either she's so full that she can't or just doesn't want to move, but it's funny either way XD).
Posted by forgreatjustice18 8 years ago Report
YES! CONTINUATION :D
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
xP
Posted by DanzoLegend 8 years ago Report
It's been quite some time. And like always you do good!
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
Yay! thanks! lol
Posted by Aces 8 years ago Report
Goodness, that belly is getting bloated. I'm surprised she doesn't put on weight.
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
So far lol
Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 8 years ago Report
YAY!
So, what's next? Is this gonna end on a shot with her big belly?
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
I might not tell you how comics end before they actually ended lol
Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 8 years ago Report
That's fine.
Posted by neversurrender21 8 years ago Report
did not see that one coming
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
I see lol
Posted by ken115 8 years ago Report
kept us waiting huh?
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
Indeed lol
Posted by TinyZane 8 years ago Report
Oh holy shit!
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
xPP
Posted by ublover1 8 years ago Report
hehehe you know me i wouldn't say no to jumping in that fun tunnel of hers :P
Posted by ublover1 8 years ago Report
WEEEEEE!!!
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
x3
Posted by reliuskaiser 8 years ago Report
Even the camera?
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
Not exactly lol
Posted by StormyRange 8 years ago Report
Aw she seems so polite now she's ate a ton of them -u-\
Her tummy is so clean considering that too >w>\
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
Haha I guess she is!
kinda lol
Posted by Blarginated 8 years ago Report
Her belly is so big now; I hope she sits/stands up so we can see it better.
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
xP
Posted by RossTheEmeraldFox 8 years ago Report
"I didn't even.. Say anything..?"
XP
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
ow0
Posted by RiderKick78 8 years ago Report
Yes the next part and might I say it looks lovely being inside here.
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
Yay! x3
Posted by Bowyer2 8 years ago Report
Is her stomach getting heavy for her, or does she like laying on top of her struggling prey inside her stomach?
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
Maybe both? lol
Posted by PeterJuice744 8 years ago Report
I love this continuation. Im curious though are any of the mice like alive in there? I have a theory that those two spy guys might be still kicking.
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
maybe lol
Posted by rexstars35 8 years ago Report
Im still confused :/i hate being dumb
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
for what?
Posted by EmpDarkshadow 8 years ago Report
Wooot woot
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
xPP
Posted by PhantomAsh 8 years ago Report
POV shots, my one weakness >//>
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
For me as well lol
Posted by kramooo 8 years ago Report
is this the end or is there a little bit more?
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
xP
Posted by Amadaus 8 years ago Report
Ten little mice brought to a femme viperine
One tried to take her seat, and then there were nine.
Nine little mice left aghast at their fate
One spoke without thinking, and then there were eight
Eight little mice with and an unanswered question
One’s voice proved a torment, and then there were seven
Seven little mice now running low on tricks
One’s aesthetics proved a mess, and then there were six
Six little mice left trying vainly to survive
One’s appeasement was cut short, and then there were five
Five little mice still struggling for the door
One’s judgement proved faulty, and then there were four
Four little mice stall for time to get free
One gave himself away, and then there were three
Three little mice now with little left to do
One tried to fight his captor, and then there were two
Two little mice still with nowhere left to run
One’s true identity crushed him, and then there was one.
One little mouse with a truth he could not shun
He gave up all hope, and then there were none.
...
Okay, as you have likely just learned, I'm not really a poet, but this reminded me of the "And Then There Were None" book by Agatha Christe where ten guests go somewhere they were invited to and all of them die by the end. It even has a comparable end as the last "guest" gives up after being crushed by the revelation ^_^
(BTW, couldn't help but laugh at Emi's contrite look when asking him to come over - either she's so full that she can't or just doesn't want to move, but it's funny either way XD).
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
haha sweet! lol
I haven't heard of the book though..
Hmmm I mean actually I haven't finished a single book in English lol
But why thankssss xPP
Posted by moonlightshy 8 years ago Report
so.. we are being eaten? (love this character. but afraid too..)
Posted by SeekGr 8 years ago Report
No the last guy lol
Posted by moonlightshy 8 years ago Report
aah. k. thankies