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Woo, new update!
I could have continued and made this one longer but I thought you'd like to see it earlier so I broke up the parts in this one. Good idea, or would you prefer longer updates and more... complete scenes? ;)
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Posted by Killjoy364 8 years ago Report
part of me is still waiting to see the centaur and the naga story continue XD but I would say either post the section fully or...if you wish to build tension cut it off at the most climatic moments
Posted by VelveteenDreams 8 years ago Report
I second my associate on all these things.
Posted by mysta 8 years ago Report
Haha, well I do tend to leave cliffhangers. :D
I think the next update will basically be what I could have included in this one, if I'd delayed the release.
But yeah, we'll get back to the cent/naga in a short while. ;)
Posted by Apostolos 8 years ago Report
Damn, I was actually starting to like the two of them...
Posted by mysta 8 years ago Report
Ha ha! Well, these things happen... :'(
Posted by Apostolos 8 years ago Report
Wonder if she's the same harpy using the princess as a toy... Might mean they could survive
Posted by Kaoru 8 years ago Report
That was actually pretty neat. The sort of back-and-forth, dynamic conflict is something you don't really get to see that often. And of course, Richard being stuck inside his own head is a neat contrast to Tris being stuck somewhere else. I would definitely like more updates, but I think I might be in the "longer-scenes" camp honestly...
Posted by mysta 8 years ago Report
Thanks! I love writing this kind of scene.
Yeah, I think I prefer longer updates too, but this seemed like a reasonable point to pause it, so I thought I'd show people. :D
Maybe I'll delay next time. :/
Posted by Aickavon12 8 years ago Report
yay new update :D
Posted by mysta 8 years ago Report
Yup! :)
Posted by nbe21 8 years ago Report
damn these cliffhangers!
Posted by mysta 8 years ago Report
He he... What a tease. :p
Posted by joeburp22181 8 years ago Report
I love your vore writings. It would sure be awesome to see more of your talent in sprite games. :)
Posted by mysta 8 years ago Report
Thanks!
What do you mean by more of my talent?
Posted by joeburp22181 8 years ago Report
I enjoyed the vore games you were a part of, and would love seeing more of that.
Posted by mysta 8 years ago Report
I see. Don't worry, I'm working on them too!
Posted by joeburp22181 8 years ago Report
Awesome! :) Some of the funniest games I've ever played to be honest :)
Posted by joeburp22181 8 years ago Report
Funnest too*
Posted by babyhater 8 years ago Report
Richard you better save Tris or I'm rooting for you to die next.
Posted by babyhater 8 years ago Report
Also great story.
Posted by mysta 8 years ago Report
Haha! Thanks.
Well, if he doesn't, it looks like he's headed that way...
Posted by Goblingobler 8 years ago Report
Ahhh I love to see this on my watch list...! :D Can't wait to see where it goes with the dark beauty with the prince. :3 Could this be the same harpy that stole away Veronica?
Posted by mysta 8 years ago Report
No worries. :)
Well, she is at least the same colour.
Posted by Sora 8 years ago Report
You have some of the all time best taunting and teasing in your stories Mysta. Love it !
Posted by mysta 8 years ago Report
Thanks, they are fun to write too. :)
Posted by almindore58 8 years ago Report
How far r u in completing the next chapter? I need to know about Bell
Posted by almindore58 8 years ago Report
Seems more than three weeks have passed
Posted by TheLoneTemplar 8 years ago Report
For the love of god please save them! They've been some of my favorite characters since they entered the story and they just finally got together.
(P.s. I really love the story btw; you've done a great job of creating the world of the story and have been doing great at conveying emotions and thoughts, the only real thing that needs improvement is that it does seem to have any direction other than a large amount of various types of vore. So maybe try to strengthen the story line; by giving them a larger goal)
Posted by mysta 8 years ago Report
The large amount of vore scenes are the direction. ;)
I feel that having more than one or two simple plot points would detract from the above purpose.
Hopefully will get around to writing the next chapter soon... :/
Posted by TheLoneTemplar 8 years ago Report
Oh! Yeah, and Tris is best waifu!!! >:3
(Let the arguments begin!)
Posted by Abiculan 7 years ago Report
I've loved the series and all the great narratives but I am constantly getting frustrated now with the worlds characters not ever getting any actually fighting with their weapons properly or prey not just carrying a dagger and cutting their ways out of the preds. So basically what I'm saying is that would be really satisfying to have more blood shed in it, if you could that'd be great.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 7 years ago Report
That harpy picture is so cute.