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I accidentally cock my submissive girlfriend, and things get a little permanent.
(Takes Place in the Gutter-Verse)
I wrote this in two hours, from twelve to two in the morning, and I regret NOTHING.
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Posted by darkevilme 8 years ago Report
nice. just gotta say, i liked reading this one a lot.
Posted by AegisOfRoses 8 years ago Report
Thanks a lot, I had an excellent time writing it!
Posted by ShadesofBlack 8 years ago Report
Lovely read! It rushed through a lot of the later events, but that wasn't bad. I loved it especially because the CTF prey was enjoying it all so much, though I did feel bad for her parents.
If it was me, I couldn't have kept her permanently like that and moved on, not actually. That makes it all the more hot and surreal.
All that said, I can picture an alternate timeline or story where things went differently after the first 2 paragraphs. Where the 1st person storyteller did let her out... maybe after just a few days, or maybe only after teasing another orgasm or two out of her by talking about keeping her forever. Then it became a more regular game for them. Especially with the way he teased her with permanence and she liked it!
Posted by AegisOfRoses 8 years ago Report
It definitely crossed my mind, and as a frequent employer of empathy, I had a hard time writing this! Not to say I didn't *COUGH*soil my panties*COUGH*, but I do like making people in my story happy. Don't you worry, there will be more CTF, and definitely more teasing and games! That's Lust's favorite, after all.
Posted by lykeslycks 7 years ago Report
I had read this before, happy to come across it again! I love a cocky cock pred :)
Posted by AegisOfRoses 7 years ago Report
The other one, "A-Dick-ting" is up on my account as well, but you will have to download it! Glad you enjoy my work, I hope to see much more of yours!
Posted by BatfinK16 7 years ago Report
*doesn't have words but is in need of much nutrition to recover*
Posted by AegisOfRoses 7 years ago Report
Lol
Posted by BatfinK16 7 years ago Report
Do you think you'll make a sequel to this? I loved the 'Get right into the action' style. You had story but it didn't drag on between sexy time.
Posted by AegisOfRoses 7 years ago Report
Specifically with these two? No, I don't think so. I do have other CV stories like this one, though. Thank you for the criticism, I'll take it into account!
Posted by olddud 6 years ago Report
I really enjoyed this story, but I would have like to hear more about how he fucked her own mother with her.