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Joruri Ichijo, Pandora City's self-proclaimed heroine, attempts to finally acquire a sidekick to join her never ending journey to vanquish evil from Pandora City. Unfortunately, with the appearance of a gravid slime, the young heroine's search is put on hold.
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Posted by noisekeeper 8 years ago Report
Very nice story! Size difference, eaten from within, slimes, it's got it all!
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 8 years ago Report
Glad it didn't disappoint. Seems I might have to do some more stuff with Tina in the future.
Posted by HipAttack 7 years ago Report
I may have forgotten to give this a read for the longest time, but I'm glad I got around to it! Fun story, man, and pretty A+ on the kink side, too
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 7 years ago Report
Glad you liked it. You might want to take a look around and see what else you might have missed.
Posted by Booner 7 years ago Report
Shame I didn't find this story earlier! Absolutely love the slimegirl transformation and growth. I really enjoy your style of writing as well!
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 7 years ago Report
Why thank you, I do apologize that my tagging isn't the best so that probably is the reason you found it so late. Hopefully some of the other stuff I've written can interest you.
Posted by Deviantfan16 5 years ago Report
Okay this was a very good read. Sign language Samuel should be the obvious pick. He's the only one who really is applicable. Plus everyone will be confused by what the heck he's saying.
Also why does everyone think Joruri's delusional when she actually has powers? I mean she's apparently tougher then a normal person from what I can tell, can eat evil, and can transform into what she eats. Plus she does protect the city pretty well from what I can tell
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 5 years ago Report
It's all in her personality and speech that lead to everyone else labeling her as delusional. It also doesn't help her main power is tied to eating beings whole when that's something a fair number of people in Pandora are capable of. Also in-story everyone had left after Joruri ate Tina.
Posted by Deviantfan16 5 years ago Report
Okay I get it. Though I’d think most people would be at least some people would label her Over Dramatic and a Chuunibyou rather then fully delusional. Still a cool Jojo Reference.
Also Will we see about the Ichijo Family beyond the two Siblings? We need more Jojo in us all
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 5 years ago Report
Npoe. Joruri and Joshiro are all that's ever going to be around. Maybe their parents will get a small cameo or something down the line, but for the most part that's basically it.
Posted by Deviantfan16 5 years ago Report
Why? Do they just not matter?
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 5 years ago Report
It's more of that their father is busy managing the Ichijo Zaibatsu and while their mother isn't as busy assisting with some of those issues, she doesn't really have much reason to visit Pandora City.
Posted by Deviantfan16 5 years ago Report
What’s the Ichijo Zaibatsu?
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 5 years ago Report
"By definition, the zaibatsu were large family-controlled vertical monopolies consisting of a holding company on top, with a wholly owned banking subsidiary providing finance, and several industrial subsidiaries dominating specific sectors of a market, either solely, or through a number of subsidiary companies."
Posted by Deviantfan16 5 years ago Report
So he's a businessman. Does that mean the Ichijo siblings are loaded?
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 5 years ago Report
Yes, the siblings are loaded except because Joshiro ran off he's kind of cut off from the money until he goes back home and Joruri, because of her mindset, isn't really fully aware of how financially well set she is.
Posted by Deviantfan16 5 years ago Report
That's kinda cool in a way. Just how loaded though?
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 5 years ago Report
Zaibatsu's are generally capable of being able to influence polices and economies within Japan and possibly other countries if they set their minds to it.
Posted by Deviantfan16 5 years ago Report
0-0. Okay. How did either of them get there powers?
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 5 years ago Report
Abilities such as those run in the family, although the manifestation varies greatly.
Posted by Deviantfan16 5 years ago Report
To quite a certain weird bug man:
"I have so many questions?"
Posted by Deviantfan16 5 years ago Report
Well talking of abilities in families (horrible segue), what's your favourite Jojo Stand?