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A much more recent piece for my second upload. Two girls, one hungry, one with an unfortunate choice in friends.
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Posted by randomsnake 8 years ago Report
You umm... You write good, I uhh... Wouldn't mind seeing more.
Posted by Apex 8 years ago Report
While it won't all be exactly like this I have plenty more work to show. I hope they continue to interest you, and thanks for taking the time to read this!
Posted by rugli 7 years ago Report
Not sure if this was willing.
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
My line of thought was "willingness under duress" still has the word "willing" in it, but you're definitely not wrong. I'll add a tag or two to try and make it more clear. Thanks for your thoughts.
Posted by jgzman 7 years ago Report
I wouldn't mind seeing the continued (or prior) adventures of Suzette. Maybe tell about some of those other girls that vanished into her tummy?
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
I have a lot of other stuff I'm working on at the moment, but I'll make sure to keep Suzette in mind if I ever feel the need to write something quick and dirty, so to speak. Thanks for the read!
Posted by vorelover3678 7 years ago Report
I think Suzzette should have eaten the pizza guy and then said "you cost me my best friend"
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
I doubt Suzette actually cared THAT much about Clarke, though I imagine she'd use any excuse she could find to justify another serving for dinner.
I also just didn't think about it. Ah well, there's always the future.
Posted by vorelover3678 7 years ago Report
I just thought it was weird that Clarke her best friend for 15 years got eaten, yet the pizza guy who was late got off scott free. I just felt the Pizza guy should have been eaten if, for nothing else, not coming sooner.
Posted by gva274 7 years ago Report
One of my favorite stories on the site, thanks! I hope to see more from you.
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
Oh, wow, no, thank you! I've got more stories than I can count, so while it will come in all shapes and sizes, there will definitely be more.
Posted by TheN7Slayer 4 years ago Report
This is really good. The unwilling but hopeless prey who doesn't even bother trying to fight is sooo good.
Posted by Apex 4 years ago Report
Yep, that's this story in a nutshell. Glad you liked it!