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Zaida got a role in her theater club's play as the lead's new girlfriend, who sets the villain on her dark path - by being her first victim.
It's supposed to be all very well controlled, but as her acting mentor reminds her, accidents do happen on the stage...
Posted by Bright 8 years ago Report
Love the way you write about betrayal.
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Posted by Fylchi 8 years ago Report
Some really interesting ideas, here. The veneer of safety and precedent lends itself to a sort of nervy peer-pressured willingness that is just a delight to read. Especially when things go from routine to desperate.
I'm usually not a fan of the human/human stuff, but this really made it work.
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Posted by Goblingobler 8 years ago Report
Good show! *Clapclapclapclap*
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Posted by BardicLasher 8 years ago Report
Loved it! <3
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