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Velida survived monster and made it back in one piece! Now she just has to wait for Cassandra and Nine. Hopefully they're alright! The Princess decides to go see Ironbark, to uh...make sure she's alright...yeah.
Welp, I don't have a whole ton to preface this chapter with. I hope you all enjoy it because unfortunately, the next chapter is 'vore free'. Not this one though.
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Posted by walkingbyself 7 years ago Report
Even without vore, it will still be a good story. It's nice to have the whole party back again. Now they need to practice the time honored tradition of never splitting the party.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Not a chance! Chapter 7 is vore free because chapter 8 will contain much more than I think any other chapter so far. Chapter 8 is gonna be big. I might have to split it into chapter 9 and 7 a bit...
Posted by walkingbyself 7 years ago Report
Hype! Looking forward to reading more of your story. Vore elements is good, but I do enjoy your actual story element. Can't wait to see how Velida overcomes the reptile city.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Well thank you! Don't worry. I'm not sacrificing the story to splice in vore, the two just mesh a lot more come chapter 8.
Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report
Man this is only the second city Princes Vorable has been to and she's already got her Legendary weapon? I'm still in the f@cking forest killing giants slugs! Fuck this game! *flips table*
Jokes aside, I fell bad for Ironbark now. :( Treated as a monster by the very people she was born to protect. Sad days. Well done making me fall in love with her tho, I wasn't sure if I would like her attitude at first but she's got a sweet side.
Poor Nine... wrapped up bag of blood for a week while Cass just wanders around cleaning junk and empty cells.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Heh, I thought about doing a lengthier part on Nine's stay in prison, but I decided that in the end it made more sense if she was more pissed than actually hurt by her stay. It was only a week after all.
Ironbark will get yet more screen time in future chapters, so I'm glad you like her!
As for the legendary sword, well...instructions not included!
Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report
I liked the brief depiction of Nine's stay. I imagine she was more bored being in that hole than she is mad at being an occasional meal. She probably would have traded Cass if she could have tho... better to keep busy than to veg out in a silken prison for 23 hours 30 minutes a day.
Posted by TuckingFypo 7 years ago Report
Awesome chapter. Love the characterization you put into Ironbark. Also, nice Vore. The Princess finally jumped down a throat for fun. Very well done and worth the wait.
Posted by Arthotus 7 years ago Report
Thank you! There was good incentive, in this case, but we may get more willing vore in the future.