Beautiful. <3 too bad about Belle - I'll be honest, she was probably my favourite. Maybe we run into another centaur at some point. But regardless, great work as always.
well I can understand that but at least its not like one story series I'm reading where the threat of digestion is none existent with how much its teased
I will admit it is sad to see belle go but we as the reader cant control how the story goes only enjoy the ride but there is also the possibility that your playing the con where she somehow survives perhaps? but either way if she is dead a side story covering the event would be great
well you did leave that story off with the royal running away and the snake laughing but never touched on it to confirm so that usually gives hope that they will return so if you were going that route I understand but if not then its best to establish that they are indeed dead
There was that section where she was still trapped the morning after, but anyway I've thought of something I can include for the next chapter. (aside from the fun side story idea that I'll probably get to later in the series)
I liked Belle just as much as the next guy, but look at the brighter side of things, Rosaline finally got to eat Petra. She's only been thinking about it for how long now? Good for you Rosy. :)
Loved, loved, loved the disposal of Belle in this chapter, although wished it was more than just the skull. The rivalry between her and the naga is my favourite part of this story, and I would love to see it, and particularly hard ended, expanded upon in a spinoff or something.
Posted by Gone 7 years ago Report
Beautiful. <3 too bad about Belle - I'll be honest, she was probably my favourite. Maybe we run into another centaur at some point. But regardless, great work as always.
Posted by mysta 7 years ago Report
Well, it was too far-fetched that she would escape that one. :'(
May do a side story featuring her at some point though.
Thanks for the feedback!
Posted by Gone 7 years ago Report
I just have a major soft spot for centaurs.
And by soft spot I mean I love everything about them.
Posted by mysta 7 years ago Report
Same. Just in case you don't know about them, my vore games (Voredate and mysta's myst adventure) feature centaurs fairly majorly.
Posted by JustaLurkingPony 7 years ago Report
Oooh, wasn't expecting to see another update for a few months. Yay.
Posted by mysta 7 years ago Report
Well, my patrons voted on it. ;)
Posted by JustaLurkingPony 7 years ago Report
Ah, that'd do it :P
Posted by nbe21 7 years ago Report
Really glad to see this and though Bella was cool and fun thats just the way the vore world goes. Everyone is food eventually.
Posted by mysta 7 years ago Report
Indeed... :'(
Posted by nbe21 7 years ago Report
btw that slime is lovely wish we would have gotten to see her nom the prince hehe.
Posted by VelveteenDreams 7 years ago Report
Aaaaaw :( Fuck. Best character offed.
Posted by Killjoy364 7 years ago Report
hello friend hope your enjoying the story
Posted by VelveteenDreams 7 years ago Report
Hello KJ. And Wah D': She was the only reason I read this!
Posted by Killjoy364 7 years ago Report
I kinda get the feeling your not alone but at least they have the chapters she was in XD
Posted by mysta 7 years ago Report
Sorry! She was fun to write too, but killing her off was too delicious to resist. :')
Posted by Killjoy364 7 years ago Report
well I can understand that but at least its not like one story series I'm reading where the threat of digestion is none existent with how much its teased
Posted by mysta 7 years ago Report
Yup. Real tension in scenes is always fun :)
Posted by Killjoy364 7 years ago Report
on that I can agree if there is no danger there is no fun and the story suffers
Posted by Killjoy364 7 years ago Report
I will admit it is sad to see belle go but we as the reader cant control how the story goes only enjoy the ride but there is also the possibility that your playing the con where she somehow survives perhaps? but either way if she is dead a side story covering the event would be great
Posted by mysta 7 years ago Report
Hmmm... Yeah, I could have elaborated on her experience a little.
Posted by Killjoy364 7 years ago Report
well you did leave that story off with the royal running away and the snake laughing but never touched on it to confirm so that usually gives hope that they will return so if you were going that route I understand but if not then its best to establish that they are indeed dead
Posted by mysta 7 years ago Report
There was that section where she was still trapped the morning after, but anyway I've thought of something I can include for the next chapter. (aside from the fun side story idea that I'll probably get to later in the series)
Posted by Killjoy364 7 years ago Report
hmm well it sounds like you are planning a flashback part to the next chapter?
Posted by mysta 7 years ago Report
We'll see ;)
Posted by lolomine 7 years ago Report
Oh my…. Rosaline and Belle and Petra are fat and compost frames of the naga not a heroine frame all together.ecchi.
Posted by mysta 7 years ago Report
Sounds fun! XD
Posted by lolomine 7 years ago Report
IT'S A SAD THING THAT THEIR ADVENTURES HAVE ENDED HERE AS A PILE OF BONE AND SHIT!!
Posted by almindore58 7 years ago Report
I know it was Impossible for her to survive, but I still wanted to see what she was going through with the naga
Posted by mysta 7 years ago Report
Perhaps I can still cover that scene, hard to see where I'd fit it in though. I'll have to see.
Posted by almindore58 7 years ago Report
That might be an extension of that bell side story thing
Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report
I liked Belle just as much as the next guy, but look at the brighter side of things, Rosaline finally got to eat Petra. She's only been thinking about it for how long now? Good for you Rosy. :)
Posted by mysta 7 years ago Report
Lol. I think that's the true message we can all take from this.
Posted by SuperheroFood 7 years ago Report
Loved, loved, loved the disposal of Belle in this chapter, although wished it was more than just the skull. The rivalry between her and the naga is my favourite part of this story, and I would love to see it, and particularly hard ended, expanded upon in a spinoff or something.
Posted by mysta 7 years ago Report
We'll see ;)
Posted by JClim 1 year ago Report
Noooo. The way Belle died has me sick. Naga had that good plot armor. Great story though
Posted by mysta 1 year ago Report
Even strong characters can get overworked. It only takes one slip up... Glad you're enjoying.