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Horse/Human F/F vore, non-consensual, sexual themes- M/F, F/F
I had intended on proof reading and re-writing portions of this story before I posted it but, unfortunately, I hit some major writer's block and just never managed to get around to it.
So, what you have here is not up to my own standards. It was actually my first story attempt and so it may seem jumpy (and you'll notice I couldn't decide whether to write in first or third person.)
I'd love to get some feedback. I'm hoping some positive responses will help kickstart me back into writing the story.
So far, I have several chapters in mind as well as at least one non-fatal alternate ending.
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Posted by theclaw 6 years ago Report
want this story posted in segments over at the forum?
Posted by lovesdogs24 6 years ago Report
Yes it was. It was my first story written for the site (before I had a gallery). I had intended to make final edits before posting it to my gallery but, that never happened. So here it is.
Posted by theclaw 6 years ago Report
shame its a good story, kind of reminds me of some of the early vore stories from back in the the early 2000s. either way keep up the good work.
Posted by Drakira 6 years ago Report
Didn't actually read this until you posted it in your gallery, good so far. I kinda hope there is an ending with manure personally, and I loved this one like all of your works. Hope to see more in the future
Posted by lovesdogs24 6 years ago Report
I'm working on that in the next chapter. The next vore scene won't be particularly long or detailed but will include scat from Sky's previous meal.
Posted by Drakira 6 years ago Report
Good to know. I'll stay tuned then ^.^ Your works have been great so far, really though. I do love how casual some of the willing scenarios you have go too, but I can just assume Ben might take a casual trip in a gut to come out a rump some time too.
Posted by giblieherps 6 years ago Report
Cant wait to see what hapens to bens sister and friend :)
Posted by Choco0 6 years ago Report
Totally looking for the continuation :3
Posted by Kabei 5 years ago Report
Oh wow this got a picture now! Does that mean a possible continuation? It’s a really good story.
Posted by lovesdogs24 5 years ago Report
There are a few frameworks already written up. I am trying for you folks here
Posted by Loverofhalo 3 years ago Report
Any chance of more of this?
Posted by Graywolf18 5 years ago Report
You're not the only one excited for a continuation, this is my fav horse pred story.
Posted by YummyLady 5 years ago Report
:(
Posted by Obaun 5 years ago Report
Amazing story. I suppose if your looking for feed back keep the 3rd person and keep switching from perspectives during vore scenes to help show the intensity of the moment. But that more opinion than anything else.
Posted by comandmaster 5 years ago Report
can we get a link to the thumb nail plz
Posted by MisterBad 3 years ago Report
I love how Liz is so proud of Sky for eating Abby, because of a situation she low key facilitated. That plot type is a first in my experience and I loved it! I would absolutely love any continuations on this theme with these characters. Sky is an amazing and wonderful pet horse!
Posted by simalst 1 year ago Report
Love it, hope to see more soon?
Posted by Saint26 1 month ago Report
Thats one of the best storys about horse vore ive ever read. Hope it give more about it.
Posted by SapphireX 1 month ago Report
Could you post a thumbnail link please????