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The third installment of Voracious Vengeance; A certain two-toned mute has now found her way onto Yang's menu, but not without getting the thrashing of her life.
Meanwhile, at Beacon, a familiar face rises again....
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I really, really, REALLY fucking hate Neo.
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Posted by Davyjones 6 years ago Report
Even better reading it for the second time....and the third.....fourth.....someone send help...
Posted by Larkspurdiblock 6 years ago Report
Heh heh, thanks! What was your favorite part?
Posted by Davyjones 6 years ago Report
Probably Pyrrha coming back followed by Yang's post vore fun and thoughts
Posted by dragonvenom 6 years ago Report
When will we get to see Pyrrha back in action? Will Yang or Pyrrha meet the others? And what in Gods name is yhe fate you have planned for poor lucky Jaune?
Posted by SwordkingX5 6 years ago Report
most likely Yang having her way with him in the lair.
Posted by SwordkingX5 6 years ago Report
Please have Yang use Cinder as a sexy toy for allowing her lains to swallow her whole.
Posted by HolyDragon158 6 years ago Report
I like the story, however, I don't like how Neo was able to speak...because she is mute...
Posted by Larkspurdiblock 6 years ago Report
RT confirmed in a podcast that Neo isn't mute; she just chooses not to talk.
Posted by HolyDragon158 6 years ago Report
I understand, but the story you wrote said: Neo was bored. The mute assassin sighed to herself...
The you put dialogue for Neo.
I'm sorry, it's an OCD and it bugged me
Posted by HolyDragon158 6 years ago Report
*Then
Posted by Larkspurdiblock 6 years ago Report
I am aware, yes; in the story, she chose to talk. It's not that hard to figure out, dude.
Posted by Chupathingy1990 3 years ago Report
Love how ruthless Yang is as a pred.
Posted by Matanuiv 3 years ago Report
Amazingly well done! ...Is this still continuing, though? I won't be too upset if the answer is 'no'. It has been a while after all. Just seemed like it was finally starting to pick up.