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This was a commission for SuperheroFood, originally finished 26 October 2017 / Edited and re-uploaded January 2021.
A snobby young woman named Kylie turns up at the Astral Alley, a trendy yet relatively unknown restaurant in town, to meet some friends for dinner. When she finally gets let inside, she quickly finds much more than she expected. The Astral Alley's usual customers are quite peculiar, and they've got something called their "Daily Special" that spells doom for our bitchy friend...
This was a fun take on the vore restaurant setting that I've gotten to write about before, with a bit of a more gruesome setting that focuses on cooking and snuff with very unwilling prey. enjoy!
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Posted by TheSoulessGem 7 years ago Report
Yes. Hype.
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
♥ You're the best!
Posted by Apostolos 7 years ago Report
Well definitely wouldn’t help a bratty vegan like that out of there... probably would act as a paid masseuse for any diners though
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Now that would be a sweet gig! As long as you could tolerate all the gore!
Posted by Apostolos 7 years ago Report
Hmm well I only have to do my job after they eat correct? So just wait in a separate area until someone wants a massage, besides I don’t have X-ray vision or anything
Posted by TETRO 7 years ago Report
That story was absolutely sick, twisted, and deranged!
...Nice work! ;)
From the moment the main character started talking, she was so irritating, I desperately wanted to see her turned into shit. Thankfully, I was not disappointed. I kind of wish I could have gotten more details on her final moments as she was digested, but the delight of the predator and abject horror was done well. Your level of detail is also pretty consistent. It leaves room for expansion, but you touched on enough points to give the story a punch.
I've always wondered if vegans were good to eat. I bet their meat is really lean. Now I know!
I remember your earliest works from a long time ago, and it's nice to see how far your style has developed.
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Thanks so much! Your commentary means so much to me, and I'm sincerely happy you enjoyed the story ^^
To be honest, I couldn't help to find poor Kylie a bit endearing by the end, but I'm glad you found her as appetizing as Zurlia did~
And that means a lot to me that you remember my early stuff! I think hardly anyone else on here has been around that long! But I often look back and get nostalgic as well~ thank you again!
Posted by ExplosiveWaifu 7 years ago Report
You just keep getting better.
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
♥ It's because I've got friends like you to support me along the way! ^^
Posted by Maxwell343 7 years ago Report
I would totally work there! It looks like fun and I bet the pay would be pretty good as well! :3
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Probably, as long as you're a Serpentoid too! :p
Posted by HMDVore 7 years ago Report
Loved it
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Thanks ♥♥♥ ^^