Posted by zoleitup 7 years ago Report

finally an fantastic dark irony srory from you again! would love to see some misunderstanding and unaware plot again too with non consensual too.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

I have my moments when I enjoy dark irony. :p Thank you! At least the misunderstanding turned out somewhat to Clara's advantage.

Posted by oishi1 7 years ago Report

I will show this one to i8oishi1 as an example of why I get excited when you write a new thing.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

That's quite a compliment. ;) Thanks; I'm very glad you enjoyed it!

Posted by WoWoW 7 years ago Report

Talk about delicious irony.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

That's one way of putting it, yes! :)

Posted by Plasmids 7 years ago Report

I have to say that this is story is by far one of my favorite transformation/vore stories that I have read from you since that other story you wrote about the witch turning a man into an oyster. This was a very well written story and I really enjoyed each one of the characters that you created for this story. I also really liked the ending as well. It was a twist that I was actually not really expecting. I was expecting that he would be teleported to that girls house and she would be so excited to eat him. Or it was a friend of hers at her home that saw him first and ate him. But I never thought that the witch herself would snack on the man. Of course, I wouldn't mind being eaten by her. As you described her, she sounds like a real beauty and her personality is really wonderful, so it'd be a pleasure to be eaten by her.

The other two characters that you told in this story, Sandra and Angie were some of my favorites in your story. You really made a life-like statue of person seem like she was alive even though she was transformed into that marble statue. I was really interested to know just why she had decided to become a statue and how long did she want to remain as a statue. Angie was in the story for a brief moment, but I was I really liked her shy personality when the spell that attracted her to the sandwich faded away. She did seem really cute as a button. In fact, every transformee that you talk about was interesting as well. Trying to figure out why they choose that form to become in Clara's home.

I really do wish that Clara was a real person and a real sorceress in real life. I wouldn't mind paying her a visit and being transformed into something for a while (not just food, lol). You should really use this character in an interactive story and get some of your readers to be in the story. You can have different transformations from your readers and if there is no vore transformation you can create a character that would be the vore transformee. I think it would be fun to read! Anyway, thank you again for the awesome story and I look forward to seeing more transformation stories from you in the future!

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thanks; I'm very glad you enjoyed it! There's just not enough (decent) transformation vore out there, so I do like to contribute now and then, with stories that fit with my own fantasies. ;)

Like you, I certainly wouldn't have minded being that sandwich, eaten up and thoroughly enjoyed by a slightly guilty-feeling Clara! Or, indeed, being one of the other transformees in her home...

I have a vague idea for another transformation vore story with her, in which Angie and Sandra might make a brief appearance too. The beautifully exotic sorceress and her cute maid are creations I would quite like to use again, if I have enough inspiration! I'm not sure about an interactive, though: I wouldn't want Clara's house to just be filled up with lots of new transformees. ;)

Oh, and I agree: Having John sent successfully to Carole's home and then unexpectedly eaten by a friend of hers would have been fun. But the logic of the spell was such that Clara couldn't bring himself to send him on. And so he ended up in her tummy. :p

Posted by Plasmids 7 years ago Report

Yeah, the spell that she placed on him certainly would have been a difficult one for her to complete her task of sending him to Carole's home. Although, I have to say that anyway that you would have gone with it in the end, I still would have enjoyed it! The story was just so interesting and fun in the first part of it that I was hooked on it. I can imagine a scenario of john the ham sandwich being eaten by one of Carole's friends and she is like dancing around the room like Elaine from Seinfeld (when she was eating the decade's old cake from Peterman's office), lol.

Though, I think that even though John was eaten by Clara I have feeling that he eventually warmed up to the idea of it in the end. I mean, at the start of the story his eyes were really focused on Clara's lips, her smile and teeth. And he really got aroused when she mentioned how she liked to nibble on the man turned fountain pen. So, I believe that he really liked being eaten by her, but then again I don't know what effect Carole had on him and we also do know what he was thinking when she was eating instead of Carole. So, it's just a theory of mine. Personally, I wouldn't mind if she was the one that ate me all up. A fun personality with a knowledgable mind and not to mention a very pretty woman... how could I resist, lol.

I would really love to read a sequel to this in the future! I would love to see more of Clara doing her transformation magic on more willing transformees. I would also like to see more of Angie as well, like maybe she is the one that answers the door and offers them drinks and such. And maybe when mentioned that she is also a transformee, she would blush cutely and confirm that is indeed a transformee. I think that would be really fun to see. And then seeing Clara teasing Sandra again in front of her next client would also be fun to see as well. So, many fun things that you can do with theses characters. I look forward to your next story with them!! :)

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

I agree, John probably did enjoy (to some extent at least) being eaten up unexpectedly by Clara. Even though he was certainly frustrated, disappointed and a bit angry not to be eaten by the woman he wished to be inside, I'm sure he took pleasure from being hungrily consumed by the lovely young sorceress. ;)

About Sandra, I'm wondering whether we should see her back in human form at some point. Maybe not. It's more fun if the transformation is indefinite. The way I see it, she told Clara she could keep her as a statue for as long as she (Clara) wants. As her dreamy, blissful expression suggests, Sandra is quite happy where (and what) she is. And I don't think she minds being teased by her owner, from time to time. :)

Posted by Plasmids 7 years ago Report

You know I never even thought about Sandra turning back into her human form again. That would be kind of interesting to see her back in human form and to see what her personality is like. Maybe she is like Charlotte (another story series I liked from you, :) ) where she is shy, blushes frequently around Clara, and also loves to be teased and played with by her owner even when she is not a statue. That would be really interesting to see, but still I don't mind if she remains a statue in the next story with her and Clara. And maybe what you could do is show that Clara has the ability to communicate telepathically with all her transformees if she chooses to do so.

As it was shown that Clara has the ability to either read minds and maybe even see into the future as she know when John was going to arrive and who he was without asking his name. So, with that being said, maybe she has other abilities besides those that were shown in the story. Maybe, instead of transforming Sandra back into her human form she actually communicates telepathically to her favorite statue and they have a nice little chat. Something like that would be pretty good to see if you write a sequel to this story. So many ideas and paths to travel in this story world if you create a sequel to it ;).