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Aaaaaaand there we go. the last page of this long chapter. It's been quite a bit of work, but I enjoyed it until the end :)
Thank you to everyone for your wonderful comments and support. I think the best part of this work was seeing all of you guys talking and commenting on this project, it made me realize how much of a beautiful community this site host ^^
See you guys pretty soon, but until now... *proceed to lay on the bed and sleep*.
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Posted by Zego21 7 years ago Report
im gonna miss that girl
Posted by MouseBoy 7 years ago Report
great story, sad clauria died, but im liking the angel girl >w>
Posted by BIGBIG 7 years ago Report
https://orig00.deviantart.net/ece4/f/2016/125/8/0/k_on__yui_in_panic___gif_animation_by_kyoflameashhylden-da1dsuu.gif
Posted by rexstars35 7 years ago Report
Ima do you one better
https://m.imgur.com/t/sad/vPD5S87
Posted by Seproth 7 years ago Report
well I am glad that Carol is seemingly sticking around. Depending on if you ever continue this series. But it was great I enjoyed the hell out of it.
I have a lot I want to say buuuut like you I am tired so I will but later.
Posted by Slickzippo 7 years ago Report
Great series
Posted by neversurrender21 7 years ago Report
You actually did it....color me impressed i thought youd pull a bait and switch
Posted by Quakiest 7 years ago Report
I cri everytime
Posted by edwinflores428 7 years ago Report
Honestly despite all the vore, gore, action and story telling...this is a beautiful page
Posted by Cinquint 7 years ago Report
Real talk, it's great to see stuff like this get made. I love the amount of care and work that goes into these stories, and the artwork along with them o 3o I saw that first post almost a month ago, and that "(1/70)" on the end, and went "Holy shit, man, we're going for a ride." You did not disappoint P_P
Posted by sadcat 7 years ago Report
Damn I don't know what to feel about this, but one thing for sure.
I sure hell a lot was glad to ride this train. Such feels and awesomeness.
I kind of hope for a presequel but I am sure it's not Pred Police anymore.
Thank you Bedtime for this, I had fun the past few months you were making this. You are a Blessing to Eka Portal. :D
Posted by Monopolus 7 years ago Report
I don't know what to say other than it's 70 pages of a really nice story that hit me right in the feels. You deserve every bit of praise for it.
Posted by JohnnyF102 7 years ago Report
that sucks she died wow how sad
Posted by JohnnyF102 7 years ago Report
but it is still pretty god
Posted by JohnnyF102 7 years ago Report
are you gonna continue with story?
Posted by BedTime 7 years ago Report
Even I don't know :P
Posted by Tai223236 7 years ago Report
I haven't posted much on your pages, but please be assured I read every one, and so, so glad I did. Such a great story : )
Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 7 years ago Report
https://thumbs.gfycat.com/SnoopyEminentAnemone-size_restricted.gif
Posted by Yusaris 7 years ago Report
I laughed, cried, laughed again, cried again. Very nice story, nice art. Thank you!
Posted by TheDog 7 years ago Report
https://media.giphy.com/media/3oKIPnHiVl2nVq6uTC/giphy.gif
Posted by x9comega 7 years ago Report
She still has two halos, doesn't that mean she's still a demon girl at heart?
Posted by Hereforvore 7 years ago Report
If you take a clay pot, and smash it into pieces, even if you glue those pieces back together, it will never be exactly the same as before. The damage will remain.
Posted by x9comega 7 years ago Report
So yes is the answer I'm hearing
Posted by Hereforvore 7 years ago Report
I think she's managed to suppress it, so it's no longer just below the surface, but I think if she was pushed too far she would sink back to it.
Posted by x9comega 7 years ago Report
Also, theory. They planted the watermelon girl in the ground, presumably without a coffin given that washer request. I think she's going to grow a new body, or multiple.
Posted by forgreatjustice18 7 years ago Report
4real tho bedime, you are a very good storyteller. the hilarious 4th wall breaking/memeing/depressing/sad you got all my emotions man. Thanks for sharing :)
Posted by whatisthissheet 7 years ago Report
Rest in peace watermelon tits o7.
What a glorious story that was.
Still can't believe I'm sad about the death of a watermelon girl. This was a great story to read.
Posted by x9comega 7 years ago Report
I'm 80% certain she'll come back. Recall she requested to not be buried in a coffin. Also recall, she's a watermelon.
Posted by whatisthissheet 7 years ago Report
Oooooh, it just felt like she didn't want to be in an enclosed space like a pred's stomach. But she is a fruit girl so she might be able to reform under the dirst.
Posted by The-Lonely-Gamefreak 7 years ago Report
Absolutely wonderful. I still curse you for tugging so hard on my heartstrings with the scene before this ended, but I cannot say it's not terrific. Again, I am surpirsed to see a main character killed and not magically reincarnated. I'm even more surprised with how he has become so light-hearted and happy, even befriending Carol. Nevertheless, these events are well deserved, and you even managed to get us to laugh at the end with that narration joke, despite it being such a tender moment!
Keep up the amazing work!
Posted by plazmamaster 7 years ago Report
Beautiful story
Posted by armedndangerous 7 years ago Report
great story, great work.
if you ever want to deus ex machina the plant girl though you can always have her grow a younger self and come back in a different story, probably as a villain with amnesia or just really pissed off seeing he found someone else.
Posted by Hereforvore 7 years ago Report
While I'm sure a lot of us would appreciate her return, it would completely undermine the impact of the death.
Posted by x9comega 7 years ago Report
Look right in front of the headstone there's a sprout growing already! The "no coffin" thing was a strange bit to add in, even if it did add to the feel at the time, and this would make for a satisfying explination as to why he wrote it like that in the first place.
Posted by Hereforvore 7 years ago Report
Ooh, I have an idea. I still think her coming back would undermine her death, but think about it. If she dies, and she is buried and a new plant girl grows from her, wouldn't it make sense for it to be her 'daughter'? Some memories could be passed on so she knows who Shotius is, and she could look very similar, almost identical to Clauria because genetics.
A way of not exactly bringing her back, but continuing the story and her legacy in a meaningful way.
Posted by Sime3690 7 years ago Report
It was beautiful story
Posted by 157and493 7 years ago Report
Well... it has been interesting.
I am surprised you had the guts to actually kill off one of the main characters.
In the end you did a great job. It was a story full of action, fan service, and of course vore. You should be proud of yourself for your accomplishment.
Posted by NotMax 7 years ago Report
MASSIVE props for making this a daily thing dude!
Posted by Bledric 7 years ago Report
Nicely done all around u 3u
Posted by HuntMaster 7 years ago Report
Me: https://m.popkey.co/e7e69a/ed3xg.gif
Posted by Rebirth 7 years ago Report
Very nice work this comic was a joy to read mad props.
Posted by Hereforvore 7 years ago Report
I know it's sad and everything, but clicking on crying gifs every few comments just makes me laugh. I'm a horrible human being :)
Posted by Kurczak48 7 years ago Report
So there are two of us then :D
Posted by Hereforvore 7 years ago Report
Yay!
Posted by EvaUnit13 7 years ago Report
what a fine Story......Except it's a Terrible Day For Rain...
Posted by Senator 7 years ago Report
The Wicked Bitch of the West
Posted by Blarginated 7 years ago Report
I am genuinely impressed that someone managed to pull off a well-written "story-that-includes-vore" without said vore being the main focus; I loved this whole thing. If I had a hat it would be off.
Posted by anthony050 7 years ago Report
A bittersweet ending. But a great one none the less <3
Posted by x9comega 7 years ago Report
Like a watermellon
Posted by Seelane 7 years ago Report
~Mellonwoman No Uta~
Posted by Kurczak48 7 years ago Report
This was such a good springboard from the usual vore stories.
Can't deny the anime/manga inspiration is really strong within this one. :P
But in the end it's comic with full story! It's nice to see some fluffiness&sadness kind of story.
Posted by Slayer3345 7 years ago Report
*Claps proudly* Very well done. The plot and emotion that run through this story has spectacular. Keep it up. You have a talent.
Posted by Furanz 7 years ago Report
Ahhh. AHHH. I've legitimately got post-series sadness from a goddamn vore comic what the hell.
Complaining aside, I loved this. Easily, EASILY, one of the best comics on this site. Really nice story telling and great pacing makes it not feel like a boring chore, this was actually enjoyable like an actual mainstream comic.
Bravo, man. Exceptional.
Posted by Reiko 7 years ago Report
I can confidently say this is something the community isn't used to. You're really good at long form. Story telling :)
Posted by Redatheart 7 years ago Report
Great Story and Great illustrations! Thank you very much!
Posted by Vorelover23 7 years ago Report
This is just Waaaaaaaaay to adorable! let me guess, chapter four (even if it doesn't focus on pred police) involves the actual witch of the tenth millennium rising? there's no way you would bring up something that huge and not have it become a plot point.
Posted by DittoDotto 7 years ago Report
Press F to pay respects for the watermellon who died.
Posted by Senator 7 years ago Report
This was definitely enjoyable. RIP Clauria though. She was my fave ;-;
Posted by Bright 7 years ago Report
Well done chapter I say.
Posted by Gepfu 7 years ago Report
So sad! What a great comic!
Posted by 3ohOne 1 year ago Report
This is awesome!