Posted by girlswallower66 7 years ago Report

Man i love your work.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

That was quick! :D Thanks.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

I've just realised I'd accidentally left out several pages at the start of part 2. I've now inserted them back in: https://aryion.com/g4/view/442768 .

A scene with Ida and Marlene before the competition; one with Mariella; a scene in which volunteers arrive at the competition to be shrunk; and Janine's arrival with her husband. From 'The following evening, three men in their early or mid forties'... to 'Let’s go and see if your breakfast is ready!'.

Sorry about that.

Posted by Zalzas 7 years ago Report

Aw man! What a cliffhanger to leave on! I don't know if I can wait until the next chapter.

And gosh, Kim should still get recognition for her great feat. Having TWO very full competitors in your belly at once should at least earn her a world recored on a technicality. I love how casual she was about it too, I thinks shes becoming my favorite ^_^

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Hehe! A cliffhanger just seemed appropriate here, somehow. After the 'niceties' of the competition, it was time to re-inject a bit of tension! I'll be writing other types of stories before returning to the IVC, though.

No, Alessia was quite right to tell Kim she's not getting a world record. ;) Such things must be earned by being more full than that! I'm glad you like her character (she's one of bedford's creations); she's rather growing on me too.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

I've just realised I'd accidentally left out several pages at the start of part 2. I've now inserted them back in: https://aryion.com/g4/view/442768 .

A scene with Ida and Marlene before the competition; one with Mariella; a scene in which volunteers arrive at the competition to be shrunk; and Janine's arrival with her husband. From 'The following evening, three men in their early or mid forties'... to 'Let’s go and see if your breakfast is ready!'.

Sorry about that.

Posted by Ty975 7 years ago Report

Bruh.....you don't disappoint.
Maybe a bit more detail into Eleni's passing, but otherwise a stellar addition to your series! Well done indeed ;)

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thanks!

I noticed a couple of hours ago that I'd accidentally left out the beginning of part 2. I've re-inserted it, but I don't know whether it was there when you read it.

Posted by Ty975 7 years ago Report

I mean near the end when Eleni offers herself to Kim. That would've been a powerful scene. Though you are a connoisseur of subversion I suppose

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Yes, I know what you meant. I didn't write Eleni being eaten, because it seemed to me it would have been superfluous.

My comment didn't concern Eleni. I was simply informing you that the part 2 I initially uploaded was incomplete, with four scenes missing at the beginning. The complete version of it is now online.

Posted by Mouthplayer 7 years ago Report

What can I say! Thank you, again.

I know I asked for Cian to be eaten by Mariella but I prefer your ending, for a number of reasons but mainly because in a story full of relationships concluding in vore, it felt right that the man abandoning his fiancee for a quick thrill in a sexy blond's tummy should return home.


The hot tub conversations and burping contest were a joy and I loved it when Kim casually revealed that she had eaten Eleni.

Summer is a very dirty girl. She must drive Martin crazy!

I don't mind the toilet scenes but if that's the reason you have not posted the rest on DA, the story doesn't need them. I understand if you have had requests from other readers for that type of material so perhaps you could post an edited version sans excretion on DA to complete the set?

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

You're very welcome; and your comment made me smile. :) About Cian: My thoughts exactly! We can't have all relationships predictably ending in vore, and the dynamics here felt right for Cian to go home to his fiancée... with his unresolved mixed feelings.

Very glad you enjoyed the girls' bit of fun in the thermal bath! I'm sure many of the people they ate would have liked to be briefly back outside of them again, to see all the lovely ladies in the pool with their two-piece swimsuits and bare, tightly rounded little tummies!

Ah, Martin probably knew what he was getting into when he hooked up with Summer. ;) He might not share *all* her kinks, but he probably finds it fun all the same.

I considered posting a censored version on dA, but purely as a matter of personal feeling, I don't like cutting bits out of a completed story. So I think I'll just leave it here.

Posted by Mouthplayer 7 years ago Report

I understand, I just think it's a shame to leave the conclusion out. I also know very well that readership tastes differ on Ekas and DA and that has probably influenced your decision, so I respect that too.

Also in all the excitement and furious typing I forgot to say...double cliffhanger. You big tease!!!

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Ha, yes! Somehow, with all the niceness in earlier scenes, there just had to be an injection of tension and suspense at the end. ;)

Posted by Kasra 7 years ago Report

Absolutely worth the wait. You've done amazing work with this.

And I don't trust that it's not Lucy.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thanks!

At the end? You'll have to wait and see...

Posted by josiesshrinkkink 7 years ago Report

The russian dolls reference is very sexy. Pred stuffed inside pred inside pred. I bet Kim felt orgasmic!

Sahiba! Nooooooooooo

Lucy? I can't be....

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

I think Kim felt *very* satisfied, yes. :D Despite a bit of tummy ache. A *stuffed* pred, with her tummy very full, inside another stuffed pred, inside another in turn.

Regarding Sahiba, you'll have to wait and see! ;)

Posted by Ladybellylover 7 years ago Report

Why did you have to leave it on a cliffhanger? That's just mean! ;)

You're going to start a rumor mill about Sahiba's attacker and I've got my own theory so all I will ask is - have you already planned the plot?

I think you should put the last part on Deviantart. It's got women taking a dump. So what? It's not obscene and you won't get banned, trust me there is much worse on there than the erotic description of straining rectal muscles.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

It wouldn't have been fun if I'd ended the story without any tension or suspense. ;) Yes, I've got it partly planned out, but let me know your theory if you like.

Posted by Ladybellylover 7 years ago Report

I don't think it's Lucy Chen, you like to throw in surprises so that seems a bit too obvious.

There are two realistic possibilities:

1) it's the wife/girlfriend/relative of someone she ate who is not happy about it

2) it's a kidnap plot involving the Kalujstan secret police and Oksana is involved, possibly she's escaped and they see Sahiba as a powerful hostage to trade with.

Am I close?

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Interesting thoughts! If I go with what I currently have in mind then yes, you're close.

Posted by Ladybellylover 7 years ago Report

If I was a gambling man my money would be on the 2nd one.

Posted by Noodleboy 7 years ago Report

Suspense! Who would want to hurt Sahiba?

We have a thriller!

I don't think the poop scenes are necessary but thats just my view. Other people might like them.

But most importantly why was Rosemarie the only one to get her boobs out? I was hoping for some naked digestion.

Ps - I'm Laundryman97 on DA.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

There was so much else going on during the thermal bath scene, adding more nudity than Rosemarie's would have felt shoehorned in. Still, they were all in bikinis, with their tummy bare. ;)

Posted by Eccentrichousewife 7 years ago Report

As you know, I read this all in one on the day you posted it. I needed time to digest (he he!) it and let it sink in.

I loved it, of course. I like all the IVC stories, they are my secret pleasure.

I will start with the negatives, so that I can get them off my chest and I don't want to dwell on them too much when the rest of it was mouthwateringly sexy.

Things I didn't like

1) Having to switch websites because of toilet scenes which were superfluous in my opinion. I'm not squeamish when it comes to that sort of thing but I thought it was a shame that the whole story had to be moved when they don't add any value. I'm sorry to say that. Others might disagree and you may have had requests for them to be included so I suppose you have to keep your fans happy.

2) Not enough nudity in the spa!!!

Now the positives. My favourite things were:

1) Getting eaten by Sahiba, thank you for that :) I clearly enjoyed it :o

2) Anniki eating Manjit, finally, and dating a male pred.

3) Alessia nearly, but not quite, getting eaten by Sahiba.

4) Emily switching from pred to prey in the middle of the competition, that was very sexy!

5) Agnes and Jonas's unusual divorce ;)

6) Anniki's speech/Time's Up tribute.

7) Ida and Marlene persuading lecherous middle aged men to go in their bellies rather than their beds.

8) Darren and Melissa, the sex addicts, especially Melissa's imprompu lap dance.

9) Rosemarie and her friend naively and clumsily eating boys who still had their clothes on! I imagine a lot of young ladies' first vore experiences are like that.

10) Russian Dolls!

11) Summer and Martin, particularly kinky Summer. I will have fun with her in my story.

12) Kim's pet

13) The cliffhanger ending...

Overall, I enjoyed it massively and I can't wait for the next one. I hope its soon.

Just in case you write your next story before I do (which I hope is not tbe case because I have started mine), for the purposes of the plot, Sahiba did make a complaint to the Vore Council about being forced to spit out Alessia just as she was about to swallow. Alessia was praised for her innovative thinking but reprimanded for getting shrunk without giving instructions to her assistants about what to do once she was gone. Ali also got a slap on the wrists for shrinking her when she should have refused. They kept their jobs because the Council recognised that the situation could not have been foreseen and they were trying to resolve it by any means they could. However, it put them under big pressure to perform well at the men's event. I won't tell you exactly what happens but they both make it through the story and are therefore available for the women's event.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thanks! Not many readers have remarked on Kim's pet, perhaps because it's only one short scene in the story, but the idea seemed like fun. Similarly, indeed, the "first vore experience", and forgetting to take their prey's clothes off. That little thrill for an inexperienced girl who swallows someone for the first time.

I'll look forward to seeing what you do with Summer and Martin, then. :) (I won't be writing the next IVC story for quite some time, I think.)

Posted by DontTellMyWife 7 years ago Report

Firstly I would like to say that I read the whole story on Eka's before I saw it on DA so the swapping website thing was no big deal for me. DA is more comment friendly however.

I'm no great scat lover but Summer is damn sexy and reading her enjoying herself on the toilet was hot!

The hot tub section was good entertainment with the girls loosening their inhibitions. The burping contest had me smirking a the sheer childishness of it.

The line "it's digestion time for you!" made me shiver with delight. Lucky Eleni.

And now the IVC has a whodunnit...I don't think it's Lucy Chen but I'm dying to find out.

Just one other thing I wanted to ask: Jaaskelainen, Skrtel - have you been looking up names of former premier league footballers by country? Ha ha.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thanks! The girls were all quite excited, which meant they could indeed let go of a few inhibitions in that tub. And I'm pleased some readers at least enjoyed Summer's pleasure on the toilet.

Ha, you've caught me out. For foreign names, I sometimes use this website: http://www.national-football-teams.com/national.html .

Posted by Digestible 7 years ago Report

Ok so I think that Sahiba getting KO'd has something to do with Oksana. Kim's message is a warning that what has happened to Sahiba is going to happen to her too.

I might be a million miles off with that though.

Loved the story. I read most of it on deviantart.

I quite like the toilet scenes so I'm glad you put them in this time.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Interesting thought! And thanks; I'm glad you liked it - including the toilet scenes.

Posted by bedfordsb 7 years ago Report

Well this is masterful! Almost a novel in itself, and the crafting is first class. An intriguing cliffhanger; like some others I suspect and indeed hope Oksana is up to something dodgy as usual on behalf of the glorious People's Republic. I liked so much of this story and really can't think of any downsides. Brilliant

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thank you. It's long enough to be a (short) novel; I'm glad it's finally done!

I'll send you a note.

Posted by lazylayjay 7 years ago Report

I basically created an account on here so I could subscribe to your stories so I was massively excited when I saw you had posted new IVC.

I can't quite find the words to describe how awesome it is (probably why I'm not a writer).

The characters are so good, they seem really nice, you wouldn't mind them eating you because they're so friendly. They all sound sexy as well.

You had suspense too. I was stunned by Alessia sacrificing herself for the sake of keeping the contest alive.

I thought from the way you described her at the start of the story thst Mariella would get in the top three and it would be captured on the documentary. I was surprised that Rosemarie and Summer got in. I thought that Kim and Abena would do better, they get plenty of practice.

Emily giving herself to Eleni and Eleni giving herself to Kim was a double twist I didn't see coming.

Then there's the cliffhanger! I know some people have their theories but I'm going to ignore the other comments and just wait to see what happens.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thanks for the comment! :) The girls being nice and friendly and therefore finding people willing to let them eat them is indeed kind of "my thing", I guess.

Posted by passingthroughyou 7 years ago Report

Superb. You never let your readers down.

I know its light hearted fun but I like how you don't go for the easy option each time and the twists are well concealed. Mariella did the right thing but Cian might still be in trouble.

I thought Alessia was a goner but I was pleased when Ali saved her because I quite like her, she reminds of a strict sexy headmistress.

Emily being gobbled up by Eleni was amazing and then Kim being stuffed with Eleni blew my mind!!!

The winners were a surprise, I thought Janine and Mariella would do it. Sahiba has improved a lot since her last performance, has she been doing some more practising thats not strictly in line with IVC rules?

Oksana must be involved in the ending. Poor Sahiba!

Just one small thing, I was a hoping for more of a mention of Carla's sudden disappearance from the vore scene. After Bedfordsb's story I thought it would get more attention. Perhaps you have this planned for the final itself!

Great stuff. Can't wait for more!

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thank you! I did try to maintain some suspense. :) Sahiba may well have been practicing without quite respecting Vore Council recommendations, yes. She was determined to outdo herself and perform well, after all.

Posted by Fetishist 7 years ago Report

Read 6/7ths of this on DA. My comments on the other parts are there.

This is my favorite vore anthology right now, everything else just seems lame.

I think the other girls like going to the toilet, they're just too embarassed to admit it. I mean who doesn't?

I hope we don't have to wait too long to find out what's happened to Sahiba. She's my favorite character :(

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thank you very much! Well, some of them might indeed quite enjoy sitting their bottom on the toilet the day after, though they perhaps don't get quite so turned on by it as Summer does - and some of them actually do prefer not to think about it.

Posted by Miridium 7 years ago Report

Hey I meant to ask you this about a million years ago. How tall are the people after they've been shrunken down?

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

I'd say about five or six centimetres.

Posted by Miridium 7 years ago Report

Makes sense. I seem to recall a giantess formula that said around 5 or 6 cm (2 inches here in the US) made the person swallowable.

Posted by Sleepless 7 years ago Report

Can't sleep so I created an account. I've been hanging around for a couple of years so it's about time.

Nothing specific to say other than the IVC is one of my favorite collections of vore stories. I am a big fan of willing vore, and your characters are mostly warm and friendly unlike the the cold bitches in other stories in this genre. And you are a good writer so you don't need to pad out your material gratuitously.

Thank you for sharing your work.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Welcome to the Forum, then! :) Thanks for your comment. I'm glad I can help fill the relative lack of stories about friendly preds.