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Rarity gives Fluttershy some swimming tips, but an unexpected visitor ruins their day.
Based on an image set over on derpi that garnered my interest, as well as ideas a few stories on this site had dredged from my brain.
this will be the last story I do until I finish my dissertation so brace for the drought.
thumbnail source:https://derpibooru.org/1088083?q=swimming+cap
spellchecked 24/07/2018
I got an image to go with this story that can be found here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/511701
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Posted by joshfang96 7 years ago Report
A well done story. shame there's a lack of EQG vore pics/stories these days.(In the vore community anyway.)
Posted by doomfister 7 years ago Report
thats one of the reasons i wrote it, as i hope it tickles somebody elses fancy enough for them to either make their own vore work or commission it from other people. the reason i say that is because it would be hypocritical of me to say i want more content, in this particular franchise and not go out of my way to make some if i had the capacity, which i do.
apart from that i am glad you enjoyed it, and i hope my future works continue to be to your liking.
Posted by TheRPKing 7 years ago Report
Can you link the pic that inspired you to write this story?
Posted by doomfister 7 years ago Report
https://derpibooru.org/1088083?q=rarity%2C+locker
and this one
https://derpibooru.org/1071740?q=artist%3Arapps%2C+swimsuit
Posted by doomfister 7 years ago Report
but its a whole series of different characters, i just chose these ones to write a story.
Posted by TheRPKing 7 years ago Report
Thanks man. I would like to see you do a series though.
Posted by doomfister 7 years ago Report
i write based on what i am feeling, so i might do a stand alone or a follow up to something i have written, i basically have a stack of story ideas and i pick one based on my mood.
there is all sorts in there, mlp, eqg, disney, dreamworks, and a few other stand alones, plus the next few chapters of the forgotten one. i just flick through em and pick the one i like the look of at the time.
Posted by TheRPKing 7 years ago Report
Neat
Posted by Base54 5 years ago Report
This story was very well-written, as expected of someone with you caliber of skill when it comes to crafting literature, even if this was posted 2 years ago. Another thing that I like to commemorate you on is your skills when it comes to crafting the aftermath, in this piece in particular, I love how Sour's decision to eat Fluttershy and Rarity in an attempt to win the competition only served to be her school's downfall. It was a nice karma moment.
Posted by doomfister 5 years ago Report
aye, this was me still filling out a few ideas that had itched me over the years. I kind of have a thing which I call the echo, that goes at the end of my stories. It's basically where I leave a line that allows a possible continuation or shows the aftermath, as I like to get the mind jogging at the end, and what not :)
just in case you missed it, I got an illustration to go along with this story by the ever-talented tsavo : https://aryion.com/g4/view/511701
Posted by ArchLinux 4 years ago Report
this is definitely the best story i have read.
Posted by doomfister 4 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it bud, there is also a saucy image to go along with it ;)
Posted by Vorachist22 3 years ago Report
Amazing work.