Clione lures Merry into her Yard for a nice dinner, without telling her what, or who, that dinner actually is. We see the aftermath.
_ _ _

A trashy lil’ quickie I initially drafted back in December, featuring Clione with a big, round belly after gorging herself on some mutton.

I haven’t uploaded a samesize story in a while, but I enjoyed the teasing and betrayal elements of this one and had a fun time editing it.

This story’s focus on post-vore teasing, big bellies, stomach sounds, and belching was very much inspired by the great and wonderful  noisekeeper. If you haven’t read their stories, I would highly recommend it ^^

And for those who care - this story is not set in the same “canon” as my softer and cuddlier Yumekui Merry works, such as In Your Dreams.

It’s basically a “what if” scenario if Clione secretly ate Dream Demons on the side. As such, Clione is a bit out of character... Though for me, seeing subversions of character like this in a vore story can be very satisfying.

That, and Clione’s outfit is just as well-designed for vore as Merry’s…

What are you trying to tell us, Yoshitaka~?

Anyhow, I hope you all enjoy this indulgent little piece : D

_ _ _

EDIT 3/26/2018:

Based on a helpful comment from Dratishness on Deviantart (https://dratishness.deviantart.com/), I've decided to slightly change the last bit of dialogue (well, monologue at that point xD) from Clione. Originally, it was implied that she would absorb Merry's powers and assume her role as gatekeeper - an idea that made a lot more sense to me when I originally drafted this in one night with one hand.

I've changed it to instead imply that another Dream Demon will assume Merry's role eventually. Is it lore-accurate? Not really, but neither were Clione's random Cell powers xD

Aside from said Cell powers raising way too many questions (as Dratishness helpfully pointed out XD), I also think it's even more humiliating for Merry that she's literally just another meal. She's not part of some convoluted scheme Clione is setting into motion; her status as gatekeeper truly means nothing. She's just a snack, nothing more, nothing less. Plus, with Clione's lack of physical strength and reliance on deception (in the story, anyway), it makes more sense to me that she'd remain an opportunistic predator who hides in her own Yard, rather than one who tries to take over the roles of other Dream Demons.

Honestly, even though I originally wrote this as some throwaway fap material, I've grown to find the above idea very interesting. I have to thank Dratishness again for their helpful critique - it made me re-examine this story and realize that with a minor tweak, it immediately became so much better ^^

EDIT 3/27/2018:

Special thanks to Dratishness for pointing out an error in Clione's last bit of dialogue, which I have fixed~! : D
_ _ _

Clione: https://konachan.com/sample/8dbe4d5b771f08234964b34fdaacdb34/Konachan.com%20-%20104000%20sample.jpg

Merry (well, you don’t really “see” her in the story - but you do see her clothes xD): http://images6.fanpop.com/image/photos/38300000/Merry-Nightmare-merry-nightmare-38353641-1920-1200.jpg

_ _ _

This is a work of (trashy) fan fiction. I do not claim ownership to any of the characters, settings, scenarios, etc presented herein.

Please login to post a comment.