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Re-Re Upload of New Friendships. Once again, forgot to add something. I hope it's fixed now. Also, to the requester, I do hope you notice that the main character is based, roughly, on you. I don't know you personally, so I don't know your personality. I hope I captured you well.
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Posted by MasterGryph 7 years ago Report
I can't help but wonder what changed from the original.
Posted by ArcaneSigil 7 years ago Report
Towards the end, I had to replace "she" when talking about Tod with "he". Honest mistake.
Posted by Choco0 6 years ago Report
Super good, a lot of things that I like (M/F vore, digestion, the idea of the husband becoming friend with the one who ate his wife that I find quite hot, etc.). But I think the story could have gained a whole lot if there was more "building" from the moment the wife said she wants to be eaten and the moment she got eaten. It feels a little rushed to me. I think it would have been hot if Max wasn't okay with it at first and then they try to convince him or something like that, it could have made some very interesting dialogues.
But great story overall, keep the good job!
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
I'd love to see this continued somehow.
Posted by ArcaneSigil 6 years ago Report
Talk to the commissioner. He might possibly ask for a continuation. OR... if you wanted to, you could commission more. Or even your own.
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
Well, who is the commissioner?
Wait a moment...
Posted by ArcaneSigil 6 years ago Report
max123
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
Link please?
Posted by hdial002 2 years ago Report
Is candy going to reform
Posted by ArcaneSigil 2 years ago Report
The commissioner didn't want her to so no, probably not.