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For April 20th of course~
This is a little different in a few ways, most notably I've been playing around with more dynamic line thickness, hopefully you'll like the change.
Also decided to change Rose's haircut; I feel like it suits her better. Do you like it?
I'll get around to changing her character sheet one of these days.
Constructive feedback always appreciated!
Alternate version if the eyes bother you
Posted by RavenXeo 7 years ago Report
everyone is very pretty<3
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Posted by DrakaNoms 7 years ago Report
Thanks ^^
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Posted by vorelover2 7 years ago Report
Awww congradulations, also this is a really good pic,i like the thicker lines
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Posted by DrakaNoms 7 years ago Report
Glad you think so ^^
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Posted by Apostolos 7 years ago Report
Preggers? When did that happen?
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Posted by DrakaNoms 7 years ago Report
Shockingly many times.
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Posted by hibbyjibby 7 years ago Report
After you pointed out the thicker line variation (I'm an idiot so I need that stuff pointed out to me), it's definitely pretty prominent and adds a lot more, personality to your style and the picture. It looks great, and definitely something I advocate seeing more of. There's also quite a lot more obvious shading, and while it's still cell shading, it gives the picture a more popping look to it.
The newer bobcut style hair for Rose certainly looks good on her, especially with the hairband addition, though I'm curious to see how you'll do the bangs with her hat now. Is her hairband replacing that black sun hat now? Another idea that popped into my head is maybe giving Rose the longer version of a bobcut, the hime cut. Or, is the shortness part of the appeal? Hmm.
Ignoring my ramblings, the only real negative is maybe Rose's pose feels a bit awkward, like she's leaning a bit far back for my personal liking. Heavy belly could balance her out perhaps, but she does still seem just a tad close to falling backwards, onto eh, Kyra here (had to look her name up, I'll admit). A little more stomach shape forms to Rose's stomach could help make it more obvious someone is in there, though there is atleast that hand imprint which helps.
So, yeah. This is looking great, Draka. Much more appealing than your previous pictures I wanna say. Keep up with it, whether it involves toking up or otherwise. Even forgot about 4/20 myself.
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Posted by DrakaNoms 7 years ago Report
Glad you like the changes; I was really happy with it.
The original haircut I chose was because I was going for something vampire-ish (I almost even gave her a widow's peak), but I didn't feel like it really helped to define her at all. She's short, kinda small-chested, sensitive, and a little bratty, so I felt like a cute bobcut with hairband was a better fit for her. I do like the hime cut, but for Rose, I do think the shortness is important.
I think I want to redesign the sunhat to compliment the new haircut, but I'm planning on keeping that part of her outfit; I don't want to pull a Stephenie Meyer on her vampiric properties, so I want something to keep the sun off her. I also considered giving her an umbrella, but having to constantly hold that kinda limits what I can do with her. Only reason I didn't include it here is because it's indoors.
The pose is just because she's short, and her gut is propped up on the coffee table.
As for the belly shape, see if it's better once I explain it. The prey is curled up in a semi-fetal position, facing away from Rose. The head is around her breasts, the butt is near the bottom front, and they're pushing out with a foot and a hand. On top of the prey, her belly is also stuffed and fat, hence the fact the bottom looks heavier, the mild crease along her navel, and the bit of chub bulging off the edge of the table.
As always, detailed feedback does not go unappreciated; You're a vital part of making sure I suck less over time~
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Posted by hibbyjibby 7 years ago Report
Ah, okay I see. Yeah, the long hair and potential widow's peak is very Bram Stoker's 'Dracula', but it is a little bit of a cliche trope nowadays. The short bobcut and hairband combo does a lot better signifying that. And hey as long as you don't make her sparkle like a damn fairy but then call her a vampire anyway, there's no way you could do worse than Stephanie Meyer. Goth umbrella works, though definitely not all the time.
I didn't notice that was a table under her gut, actually. Everything is so 'Purple Rain' in here I must've missed it. That makes a lot more sense, now.
Belly shape, yeah I can see that. Lot more thought put into it than I would've done. I am a simple man; I see shapes, I like.
In the end, lotta your reasons make a lot more sense now, Draka. Long as you keep makin' stuff, we'll all pitch in. We all suck, but sometimes we can improve and suck just a bit less.
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Posted by Robaticon 7 years ago Report
DAMN these were some long comments.
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Posted by razorbacknod 7 years ago Report
Sooo cute~! I love it!
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Posted by DrakaNoms 7 years ago Report
Thank you ^^
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Posted by Furanz 7 years ago Report
I like this change, it'll be really good for comics and sequences where the characters will be smaller in scale than in pinups like this.
Good to see Rose again too!
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Posted by DrakaNoms 7 years ago Report
Yeah, enhanced scalability is a subtle advantage of the dynamic lineart~
Glad you like her, I was really proud of the design ^^
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Posted by LuluLuigi 7 years ago Report
Lovely job. Keep it up^^
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Posted by DrakaNoms 7 years ago Report
Thanks, I'll try~
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Posted by CajunCreeper1 7 years ago Report
Why did you put a vore pic in non vore? Awesome picture by the way
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Posted by DrakaNoms 7 years ago Report
Strange, I didn't even realize I did. Oops.
I wonder how long that mistake was in effect...
Thanks for bringing it up, and glad you like it ^^
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Posted by DrakaNoms 7 years ago Report
Thanks, and that's interesting; How does it remind you of HuniePop?
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Posted by DrakaNoms 7 years ago Report
Huh. I don't really see it.
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Posted by Robaticon 7 years ago Report
Thia is not an holiday,this is fucking Sunday.
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Posted by DrakaNoms 7 years ago Report
Well, by holiday, I meant a recreational trip.
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Posted by Kisiro 7 years ago Report
Loving that smoking gal there. Overall good job.
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Posted by DrakaNoms 7 years ago Report
Thanks ^^
Her name's Rose; I've got a character sheet for her if you want to know a little more about her~
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Posted by seriousdoomguy 6 years ago Report
who did the grey hair girl eat?
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Posted by DrakaNoms 6 years ago Report
She probably just ate some rando that touched her ass, as she's apt to do
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