Trapped in the Aether (C) by Lampton

Posted by Liz 7 years ago Report

Lovely bulge.

Awesome job on the shading, I love thoses large bulges.

You keep improving Lampton :D

Posted by Lampton 7 years ago Report

Thanks Liz, I'll try :)

Posted by number12321 7 years ago Report

Some utterly top tier stuff!

I especially love your shading and facial expressions.

Posted by Lampton 7 years ago Report

Thanks! Was worried the shading would end up looking muddy but it turned out alright.

Posted by Rupie 7 years ago Report

Anti-Shadman back at it again!
But for real tho, nice job i pic, your rendering is really well done.

Posted by Lampton 7 years ago Report

reeeeeeeee
thanks Rupie!

Posted by noisekeeper 7 years ago Report

Mah gawd this is one hot Lusamine pic you drew here Lampton. Nothing better than a mom disciplining a bunch of unruly children hehe.

Posted by Lampton 7 years ago Report

Haha, agreed!

Posted by Siorche 7 years ago Report

So much about this tickles so many of my fancies. Good stuff!

Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report

I love her

Posted by Cooler4567 7 years ago Report

Awesome seeing some Lusamine Vore, I’ll bet Mallow’s up next right?

Posted by Lampton 7 years ago Report

hmm, eventually! Mallow's gonna have a four-panel sequence so it's gonna take a while.

Posted by Cooler4567 7 years ago Report

I understand, still can’t wait to see it and see Mallow with a huge Vore belly, just like Lana

Posted by SwordkingX5 7 years ago Report

I love how it looks like her hair is trapping Gladion and Lillie.

Posted by Finetti 7 years ago Report

I bet Gladion got his dick deep inside Hau while they're in Lusamine's belly.

Posted by LuluLuigi 7 years ago Report

Great picture! I think we need more of her ^^

Posted by Lampton 7 years ago Report

Thanks, I think so too ;)

Posted by KilBe 7 years ago Report

The way you used her hair is just so... mmpf~ Awesome work on that bulge too!

Posted by The K 7 years ago Report

Beautiful shading and I love how you draw and use Lusamine's hair.

Posted by Blarginated 7 years ago Report

A huge multivore from Lampton; absolutely fantastic. They're both great, but I love the edited version. Hats off to the commissioner.

Posted by Arrowintheknee 7 years ago Report

nice

Posted by BlueMarvel611 7 years ago Report

Hey Lampton long time no see, sorry for the long wait of a review from me. Had a very long few weeks that involves me trying to find more work as well as...dealing with selling and moving away from my home. That and losing my phone in the process too. So it's actually so-so all things considered. Now on with the review!

Okay to start this is a real creepy way of having Lusamine confront all the kids who oppose her. Especially given this comic sequence shows a lot. Lusamine here looks rather imposing and honestly rather scary in this one. The end of the comic here shows how she enjoys having so many meddling kids within her stomach. The thought bubble from Lusamine's mind helps add to the theme.

Now onto your drawing technique itself. I've got to say that I speak for everyone for when I say you are improving Lampton. Seriously when I looked at this comic along with others, your efforts shows through them. To start off the first panel shows just how good you are with your shading and lighting with your characters. Mostly with how you managed to make the characters more animated through their eyes. Mostly on Lusamine, Lillie, and Gladion's eyes that shows their emotions. Shading's really good too with how it shows the creepy tension on Lusamine's expression and how she holds her kids close to her long hair. On said hair, you did good with bringing out its shine and texture here. Makes it look animated. Not just that but the light that I saw in her eyes as well as other place helps to enforce the creepy tension I can feel there.

On the last panel displaying Lusamine in all of her glutton glory what with her belly all large like that. Nice texture of how it shows her skin and the bumps and distortions of all the kids in her belly. Not to mention the shine off her skin that shows that she's more than happy with her meal...and the sweat helps add to the effect as well. Seriously I almost did not see one hand print on Lusamine's belly when I looked at it at first glance. Seriously you did a good job here...and this is just the soft non-digestion version.

That said all in all you did a good job with this comic, Lampton. I always enjoyed watching the progress of your work and it does not disappoint me seeing it. I'd like to see how you would do with Wicke in the future. I'd like to see that...well, Wicke and Mallow. But keep up the good work, man and again sorry for me not giving you any more reviews than I should. Laters!

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Posted by Lampton 7 years ago Report

Thank you Bluemarvel, appreciate the write-up! Mallow and Wicke will be coming eventually, might just take a while. :)

Posted by BlueMarvel611 7 years ago Report

Then don't worry about it, I'm patient. I'd like to see how they turn out. So don't feel the rush to put them out quick. Especially after the massive download of others that you've done. So good luck and keep up the good work.

Posted by nobody321 7 years ago Report

I see that I'm not the first one to write a review on this piece I commissioned you for Lampton. Hopefully, I can also answer a question you posed indirectly in the first paragraph of your description in the conclusion of this review.

Firstly, is the atmosphere. My initial interpretation of this piece's atmosphere was that of dread rather than that of a creep factor as the blue marvel suggested. The lighting in the first panel, in my opinion, gives off an ambiance of dread because I see the dark coloration of the room the main cast is in as representing hopelessness. As without hope or motivation, people turn to selfishness, fear and radical cynicism. The bright room behind I believe represents a happy past long gone. A reminder of previous happier times for the main cast. Overall I believe the first panel does an excellent job of portraying the main cast's feelings of the situation as this is the antepenultimate act before their final fate whatever it maybe be. Additions like this really flesh out the atmosphere of the first panel. I think the 2nd panel is supposed to represent anger as the memory of past times is gone and now the four main cast members feel anger and dejection as they are quite literally in the belly of the beast and can't get out. Squeezed tightly against one another.

Secondly, The characters themselves. The green glow given by Lusamine's chest diamond and eyes show malicious intentions as demonstrated by the second panel obviously. This malicious intent is further evidenced by non-canon features such as the "flytrap" hair and the way she holds her children. As for Lillie while she retains the same eye color as her mother her position tells a different story; as Lillie's position and eye expression give off a feeling of fear. As for Gladion, my best guess is embarrassment & anger as that was mentioned in the template though because his feelings don't seem to be expressed through his eyes this can only be assessed by his position instead. As for Hau and Moon (Selene), one could imagine the looks on their faces as surprise and terror based on the unexpected revelation that Lusamine has captured them.

Finally, to answer the indirect question of what happens next. To put it briefly It's you decide scenario. The viewer is a given a few key puzzle pieces of the situation at hand and it is up to them to figure out the rest of the puzzle. Whatever their conclusion comes to based on these puzzle pieces it is neither wrong nor right. Thus adding a small essence of mystery to the piece entirely. Though of course this only applies to endo version and not digestion version in which it is obvious what happens to the main cast.

In Conclusion, You did an excellent job Lampton you have drastically improved from your earlier days. Yet somehow you keep your same base art style none the less. It's amazing how you turned just a couple of sentences into a great work of art. I'm also glad to that some people on this site appreciate your art and not just the fetish it's associated with.

Please, Pardon Any spelling errors on my part.

Posted by Lampton 7 years ago Report

whew, thanks for the write-up as well. Glad you're happy with it, and it was fun working with ya!

Posted by Bright 7 years ago Report

I really like how the hair seems to trap them int he first panel.

Posted by Lampton 7 years ago Report

Yeah, I find it a very neat concept!

Posted by linthia 7 years ago Report

Not fond of non fatal vore excepted if it's willing or entrapment, but I can say that I love the art in general and the dialogue of digestion version :p

Posted by Lampton 7 years ago Report

Thanks! I prefer the fatal version as well, handy to have both though.

Posted by linthia 7 years ago Report

Like this you can please more people :) !