Oh niiiiice~! I have one-two 'buts' though.(Except minor mistakes)
Specifically, the vore scene itself. And to be more precise, the time when Ahri's butt should hit the seat is the one I find lacking. Like, at first she leaped over Lux and slurped up everything above elbow, then descended over her and then...? I guess she started to suck the rest of Light Mage in, but it's a guess, and I don't even know her position at this point.
Asides from that, job well done! And special token for making Ahri AV. I love these and yet there barely are any...
Posted by Deleteduser89324b 6 years ago Report
What contest?
Posted by Smoge16 6 years ago Report
I'm in a discord server for League of Legends vore writers that holds weekly contests!
Posted by Kurczak48 6 years ago Report
Oh niiiiice~! I have one-two 'buts' though.(Except minor mistakes)
Specifically, the vore scene itself. And to be more precise, the time when Ahri's butt should hit the seat is the one I find lacking. Like, at first she leaped over Lux and slurped up everything above elbow, then descended over her and then...? I guess she started to suck the rest of Light Mage in, but it's a guess, and I don't even know her position at this point.
Asides from that, job well done! And special token for making Ahri AV. I love these and yet there barely are any...