Posted by serpentegigante 6 years ago Report

I wish I was the snake :) with shakira swallowed and helpless inside me.

I'll send you a message of my in depth view (its brilliant don't worry (this review (will be based on my third reading... I've read it twice, now it will be my third time, where I will let you know what I think of each part .. its certainly given me food for thought on the story... this would be great as a comic (like laptop or linart, so I really want to start (but I will try to get my requests done as fast as I can.. I've nearly finished by big series. so hopefully soon... I'll try to do maybe some frames of the beginning this week ... or what I'm envisaging shakira looking like. Also because I want it to be really good (it will take longer because I will do my drawings in colour... (i'll still post the black and white though)
and also your choice of snake (you chose an anaconda which is always good.)

I may make some changes to it... for the drawing but it really helps me envisage the scene (the best so far... well there is nothing like this story..) Obviously voremantic's story is at the heart of this but I like how you've surprised me / kept me on tenderhooks.
Check your pm soon. / or when you are online.

And again I can't thank you enough - I can see pictures infront of me with your descriptions.

Thanks
Alexander

Posted by Kasra 6 years ago Report

Really excellently done! Probably the best snake vore I've read in years.

Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report

i felt there was a lack of snake vore in the community atm. i love me my snake vore, it was what got me into the fetish all those years ago, as such i couldn't let that precedent sit.

as such i prioritised this story, and i hope it gets more folks to write or draw snake vore, as it is a staple of the vore community that in more recent years has been neglected.

i am glad i scratched that itch though, as i had a blast writing this, so in the end everyone wins.

Posted by serpentegigante 6 years ago Report

but not shakira ;)

Posted by SuperheroFood 6 years ago Report

Another excellent story, loved every word of it. Although my preference is FF Vore I also find Snake Vore very appealing, and this could be easily the best one I've read. Hope you do more like it. Especially with celebrities, as there is a surprising lack of Celebrity Vore, which I thought would be more popular.

Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report

you can never go wrong with snake vore, you will surly see more snake vore in future as its my jam.

Posted by serpentegigante 6 years ago Report

i'm happy you said doomfister its mine as well

Posted by serpentegigante 6 years ago Report

I've added some drawings for the beginning of this story...my thinking is I'll make it a full comic maybe when I've coloured every frame in...

Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report

nice, good to see you have made a start on it.

Posted by serpentegigante 6 years ago Report

The sensation spreading over her head was like that of an egg slowly being crushed upon her scalp; the saliva flowing down her face as she was lubricated for the long slide.

Reading this again... I don't know what is so great about it... I guess because nobody has really apart you pictured the senses of how one would feel ... of an egg (which is wet and runny) being crushed (and I like to think of how it stretches to.. you really did do wonders... doomfister... when you talk also about the snake swallowing her ass

her large rump; the girthy glutes no doubt filled with nutrients that he wished to gorge himself on.

I got the picture today of you know a box of chocolates eating two together which contain the tastiest chocolate cream as filling :)

that snake had a great meal... I'll try soon to draw the vore part. :) as soon as I am able ... I'm busy with uni stuff atm most this week but when I get some free time I'll really try to draw the next scene of shakira undressing into her golden pants etc...

Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report

its cool i understand, i am just happy you really enjoyed my part of the trade.

also if your into fish pred i put out a eel vore story recently. so give that a gander.